| Reviews for Kiara |
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   clay342 chapter 1 . 10/22/2018 Now now people he plans to rewrite it. Be patient |
| Jake Paul chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Ha, it's not even, Jason McCann. In reality fanfictions aren't even popular, because they count for nothing in the end, just a bunch of lame so called weirdos who write stories that aren't even offical or canon. But aside from that this story was just a regular TLK AU fanfiction with Kiara and Kopa and clearly nothing special about it. |
| Jason McCann chapter 4 . 1/19/2018 I honestly never expected this story to be this popular! Nor did I, author. And guess what, it shouldn't be! |
| Angel Coubly chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 Well yeah,Justin's right,it's probably the same reason I read it..I mean yes it didn't have those things and the cubs,but does that really make it a good fanfic?I mean in ways it could improve would probably be..uh,I don't how to word this but,maybe it could be just Kiara and Kopa and not their two sisters as it would be more interesting with fewer characters and some of the grammar,not all of it,but yeah some of it was I think you did a really good job in that regard,bringing back Sarabi and putting her on your version of TLK 2 but I do think some of the scenes weren't necessary and maybe you could make the characters act more like them selves. |
| Justin chapter 1 . 10/31/2017 Well your story was okay I suppose,but really the sequel was boring I have to admit but this wasn't really all that good..I mean like the others I agree,I only read it because it didn't have Kovara or Kotani but then again,does that really make it a good story..I mean really we're just liking it because of those things but other then that it was just kind of boring and if you're so desperate for getting a decent fanfiction without those things..you'd may as well write your own,I mean I've written tons of fanfics that are way better then that,I just haven't post it..yet! |
| Toothless 1998 chapter 5 . 10/19/2017 I liked this story and I agree that the some of the guest reviews against your story come across as unintelligent. When will you be updated? |
| Kion da lion chapter 1 . 10/5/2017 Yeah well whatever I just didn't like this cause it was unrealistic and Kiara doesn't have all these sisters for crying out loud! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2017 And it doesn't say Timon and Pumbaa are together just that they are both main characters! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2017 They aren't talking about that Zuri. This was made before the lion guard! Jeez! Are you completely clueless? And it is supposed to be an AU, where Kopa and Kiara are the youngest. Since you are also on about how you hate Kiara and Kovu's cubs, I would have thought you'd be at lease okay with this! |
| Kion da lion chapter 1 . 8/31/2017 Also,putting Timon n Pumba at the top,where it says"romance",is gay,man!,I mean I haven't read your story but it just sounds wrong n stupid! |
| Kopa da lion chapter 1 . 8/31/2017 Yeah,well you're not on there Kion,so..but this fanfic sucks,not because it's gross..because the timeline and everything doesn't flow! |
| Kion da lion chapter 1 . 8/31/2017 That's just gross,Zuri,being Kiara's older sister,because if Kion were on here,he'd be her brother,and on the real one,she freakin likes him,that's just gross,I agree with guest,this is freakin gross! |
| Queen Uru chapter 4 . 7/31/2017 Please continue! Your story is wonderful and I want to know what happens next. |
| Shafira Lioness chapter 4 . 7/31/2017 LOL. I meant will YOU be continuing it. Darn you auto correct! |
| Shafira Lioness chapter 4 . 7/31/2017 Loved your story so far. Will I be continuing it? It was great and I really liked your version of Kiara and Sarabi. |
