Reviews for The Beginning
Heather Snow chapter 5 . 11/2/2017
I enjoyed Cerulean's character and look forward to reading more. Only thing is that the degree of Josh's opposition seemed awful strong considering how he swung around in the end.
Heather Snow chapter 4 . 11/2/2017
I liked how Zach's head snapped to Sam.
smartbookworm chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
This is a great fic. Please don't discontinue this fic. I can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
Awesome job! I love this story and I am so happy that you are continuing with it. Sam is great with Cerulean and I love that dr. Barlet overheard Sam's rant. Please keep up the great work and continue to draw parallels between Sam, Jed and Cerulean's parents.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
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Gracie'sMom chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
WOW! What a great update! Poor Cerulean! I hope Sam can adopt her!
kt8a chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
I really like this story, but I think you have a posting issue that needs fixing. You've posted the first chapter twice and then the second chapter (as chapter 3) and it's marked as complete. I'm guessing that you thought you had posted 3 chapters that comprised the entire story. I suspect that the easiest way to fix this is to post a "chapter 4" that's really the third chapter, which I suppose is the actual final chapter.

I hope I'm right because I hate the idea that this story ends with "Don't leave me, Mr. Sam! Don't leave me!" It's a wonderful story and Cerulean is a wonderful character and Sam deserves an adorable 5 year old that the entire West Wing can help care for.
soph1098 chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
What happens with Sam and Cerulean?
soph1098 chapter 2 . 2/6/2014
Please write more
Gracie'sMom chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
GREAT STORY! Poor little thing. I hope that she and Sam get to become a family. Maybe with Ainsley... and what about her brother, Zach?
GUEST chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY. I HOPE THERE IS A SEQUEL.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Wow what a great story. I hope there will be more of it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Ok this cannot be the end. What happens with the dad the girl etc?
Christina chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This is great! I love Sam and how he reacts to Cerulean. Sam is so innocent himself he would get along great with kids. I also love the child abuse factor since we know the president has a history with it (and I've always assumed Sam had some in his past since he is so like the president and always so eager to please and be the optimist) Keep up the great work and please continue soon...I can't wait to see where you take this
ShawnLassiter56 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I love how Cerulean and Sam bonded! She was adorable, it was so cute that she called him Mr. Sam, and Ainsley Ms. Ainsley Hayes and Josh Mr. Josh! Really sweet, pretty please write more!
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