Sorry, but no. I realize you're probably going for the whole "love conquers all" stuff, but anyone (almost) would be better than these two. I know they eventually get a lot better, but at this point they're top focused on stalking and not training. Giving them sudden powers and a "come back, because I love you" speech won't change things. It's merely a shortcut.
Sorry if I sounded overly critical there, but it just...doesn't work. _

You should continue this story it's really good. It has only been two years since the last update.

An interesting thought, but executed poorly. Feels extremely rushed and forced.

Hinata and Sakura are pathetic and weak, at least before naruto shippuden. Why does Naruto want to kill Tsunade anyway? This fic makes no sense and it is ridiculous. The story moves too quickly without reasonable plot or charecter development.

I love this story! Hope to see the new chapter soon

cool

why THE HELL!you give hinata and sakura powers so powerful!?IN SHORT TIME!...I'm not happy with this...
(I mean both of them are weaklings)

update now please!

Nice sneak peek of the next chapter... Welcome back

Daymn this is tense

Concept is very good one though i think dialogue variation will be even better...i kno hinata needs to be outgoing bt dat duznt mean he has to shout...also in case of personalities her and sakura are quite opposites so deir dialogues shud b different...same for naruto ...i like how u gav diff reasons for betrayal o both bt den same shud go for girls...as deir dialogues are too same and ways too.i know d action and dialogue hav to coincide smwer bt elaborating about the situation will help a lot...keep going..i hope u update soon!

Welcome back! I have been waiting for this ff so long :D Hope your fine now and congrats of winning whatever made you hospitalized. And thanks for continuing this ff :)

I will look forward to ur next chapter keep us posted

I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks

I think this will b an interesting story