Ok, was not expecting to love this as much as I do. Well done, it's a great story so far, I like the plot.

There isn't another chapter...

Love this story, it's beautifully put together. I'd just like to comment that it's Gambol* Shroud, not Gambrol

Ah Blake, ninja cat extraordinaire. Must love her.

Oh, geez... nine… I wanna know who the ninth is… hmmmmmmm… I love this story. Good plot, very decent writing skill. Especially compared to some out there.

Wut new update? Very confuzed...

My only note is Gambol Shroud, not Gambrol. Otherwise a fantastic read.

This 'Experiment' person better be Weiss or else I'll be going on a fanfic-rage quit

And Blake has shown herself XD,thing's gunna get pretty

Well now that I have read through this first act, I will finally say this: wow. Just wow. I love this story, it's a great plot line and I can't wait to move on to act 2. :D

This was amazing! (I was hoping to finish this sooner but I got grounded :( ) I love this story so much and I so excited to start reading burning rose I will probably be all caught up by tomorrow and I just want to let you know that I love this story a lot. I was also wondering how long will the trilogy be?

Loved the chapter!

Lie Ren, such a sage.

Loved the chapter!

Nora seems a little bit calm and collected. This upsets the natural order of the universe.

Loved the chapter!

Oobleck has debuted!

Loved the chapter.