I remember you mentioning this idea a while ago and I said at the time that it would be intriguing. There are some differences between the idea that you originally mentioned and this one-shot but it was still was very interesting. Takeru's confusion in the situation is very understandable considering everything that happened. But, most importantly, the ending showed that Takeru's love for Hikari is what matters not whether Hikari is a girl or boy. Good job!

I know that you've been having this idea for a while, but I didn't expect you to publish an one-shot on this, since if I remember correctly, you're talking about a multi-chapter story for this one?

Anyway, I like the idea of Yamato just precisely pointing out what's important here. Sure, it'll b a shock to a teenager like Takeru (I assume that's roughly his age here?) upon a confrontation like that, but it's always nice to reach the realization that the person you love matters more. I don't know enough biology to question what happen to any of Hikari's secondary sexual characteristics in such case, though I wonder what happen when, say, she needs to attend a swimming lesson at school.

Anyway, good story! I'm glad you write this.

I didn't realize that you publish a new oneshot
My comment for this just: Oh my... hahahahaha!
to be truth, when I read 'She was born a guy' I thought that she was pregnant a baby boy, lol (I didn't read Yamato's previous statement: Are you saying that Hikari-chan is a guy)

Man, I'm just lying on my floor due to the mixture of both laughter and being shocked. Seriously, the way you twisted the plot was ridiclously awesome. Usually I don't read such stories, since I'm not a big fan of those stories. But I really enjoyed to read your fic.

It was still one of the cutest Takari stories I've ever read. You nicely described that Takeru still felt for her the same after the 'incident' and that's what truly matters. But I can understand as well that a relationship may change at least partly after such a incident.

Besides, I really liked the title. It truly fits the story.