Reviews for Starting a new school
DarkSorcerer888 chapter 7 . 7/4
The name of the school should be: The Rowan Hill Academy for the Magically Gifted
Articles and adverbs, and proper nouns are not something that should be forgone.
Red8404 chapter 4 . 12/27/2019
I have realized with this chapter that almost every other sentence has a grammatical error. They are also almost all the same words. It makes it very difficult to read.
FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 14 . 11/19/2019
You forgot Romilda Vane.
marvinkitfox1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Interesting, can't wait until this fic is translated into English, from whatever language it is in now.
yaoiaiss chapter 3 . 7/5/2019
sorry but very bad grammar and very illogical construction , Ginny/Selena can't be Lady Potter , she can only be "heiress" Potter additionally the Black title also can only go to a male heir , and even then by being soulmates harry is lord black anyway , Hermione can't choose anyone as heir so certainly not Daphne unless she have recent black ancestor eligible for inheritance , and when Sirius in the will say that Hermione has no heir it's false , harry is one heir through Dorea Potter Nee Black , Draco Malfoy obviously is another heir through his mother , hell if you want a female heiress there is also Nymphadora Tonks , the Longbottoms and Weasleys also are Black descendants making them heirs as well
tyrannicpuppy chapter 14 . 4/24/2019
A very fun read. Nicely done.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 8 . 4/24/2019
The language can make it tricky to follow at times but the story itself is really good.
ClaireR89 chapter 8 . 7/1/2018
I made it this far. But holy shit this is borderline unreadable
Janner chapter 14 . 7/1/2018
I enjoyed this story although it is fairly obvious that English is not your first language. The are so many errors both spelling and grammatical. You should definitely get a beta to proofread your efforts.
teenagebooklover chapter 7 . 10/23/2017
Shefali Chowdhury wow! Literally Parvati Patil! Genius!
twlightbella chapter 11 . 5/6/2017
Aww yay
twlightbella chapter 8 . 5/5/2017
They had sex
twlightbella chapter 4 . 5/5/2017
Aww
mckertis chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Oh Mighty Zeus, is this another nudist Hermione story ? *facepalm*
DaisyGoth26 chapter 14 . 10/21/2016
I love this. um what is the sequel called?
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