The Sherlock Is strong in this one. Very well done. Hoping to see that sequel :P

Great job with the whole story. A sequel would definitely be neat, though. There's definitely something good captured here in this alternate universe. Running with it might be a good idea.

yes please do

I can't wait for what's next.

Cyclonis looks like she's having a pretty rough time. Can't help but feel sorry for her, even given her nature in the story as a real villain. Looking forward to seeing how everything pans out!

I definitely didn't see that coming. What a way to end a chapter. Piper seems to be a bit of a ends-justify-the-means type of person. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing just yet. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

And you actually killed him off...

Sacrificing himself to angry mythological beasts? Sounds about right for Aerrow. Looking forward to seeing if he squeezes out of this one.

wow he keep getting the worst part of Cyclonis has not got her fangs in him yet.

No, you did NOT kill him off. That is wrong. Very wrong

Wut. I didn't see that coming. And I've an idea as to what the code is.

Ooh, this is interesting. Cyclonis is kinda flirty which is different

Woah, this is heating up already! Liking it

I like were this is . Cyclonis and her flirting with Aerrow it show how evil she is yet still a lady looking for a good time deep the code six letter yet they did not try his name funny.

And here comes Cyclonis. Good stuff. Glad to see another chapter, and how the story's shaping up. The shenanigans with the "key" wordplay made me chuckle. Looking forward to the next one.