Reviews for Genesis
Guest chapter 10 . 9/9/2018
I love it so much, I just wish that you make it a little bit longer, this has so much potential for a longer story and a lot more twist, but it has an ending which is good.
P. S. I'm still waiting for that next Paily story of yours!
WaitingForLightning chapter 10 . 11/21/2016
This is so good!
sofiadc66 chapter 10 . 6/24/2015
Nice, I don't know why, but I always like it when people fit Shana into their fics and I love how you made her for the story. I really enjoyed it when Paige stood up to her and punched her in the face. All the Paily moments were amazing, Paige is always the best. Thank you for writing this fic (awesome title by the way).
becksthewolf chapter 8 . 10/23/2014
Yay for Paige standing up for herself.
becksthewolf chapter 7 . 10/23/2014
Oh good Paige has some back story. I like where you're taking this.
becksthewolf chapter 6 . 10/23/2014
Paily sex scenes are always awesome.
becksthewolf chapter 5 . 10/23/2014
I really love your story, it's amazing.
becksthewolf chapter 4 . 10/23/2014
I really love this story, it's amazing.
becksthewolf chapter 3 . 10/23/2014
Oh god that was hot.
becksthewolf chapter 2 . 10/23/2014
Paily is hella hot.
becksthewolf chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
I love it.
G.W. Shoes chapter 10 . 9/21/2014
This is a great grown up paily story and sexy :) At the end I realky thought they ordered something else... *giggling*
Thulas chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
Well... I'm a sucker for 'grow up' paily so it only makes sense that this story could put such a huge grin on my face from start to finish. I really love this story it's well executed aaaand... wait for it... It has an ENDING yay! It's well told not rushed and of course and I loved their none stop sex encounters, Paige is full of surprises isn't she(wink wink) their sex life is perfect[not that I am a perv or anything ;)] but you wrote their sex scenes perfectly
Guest chapter 11 . 3/17/2014
I resent you putting up only part of my comment to respond to.

I said, specifically, that the miss lead in this chapter was what bothered me. I LITERALLY said 'you said you'd give us smut, but MEH WHATEVER' it was just the mislead in the beginning that we were getting smut, and you seemed to go 'don't care enough to write it' after you had flat out said you were going to write some smut, and then lead us to believe you had, then didn't.

If you are not going to put up my full comment to respond to, then fucking don't respond because you are, then, TAKING MY WORDS OUT OF CONTEXT!
devilsdictionary chapter 11 . 3/17/2014
I thought this was a lovely story, as are all your stories. I am very much in awe of all the writers here who sacrifice their personal time to bring joy to so many readers. I love smut as much as the next person, and certainly had some expectations about what was in the box, but still, thank you for this story, a thousand times thank you, I loved reading it. I'm sure you could have made the story even better with infinite time and resources, but that is simply not taking real life factors into consideration, let's be clear this is a labor of love. If you ever need a beta please let me know. -Shiva
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