Another good, but upsetting story. Almost stopped at chapter 9.

Dark story but happy to see the darkess clearing somewhat in Harry by the end

"How does he do that, like Kingsley said, he's not apparating, he just disappears, that's not possible," Ron said.

Ron and Hermione make me laugh. They are forever saying things aren't possible right after they have seen them happen, which means they ARE possible ... to someone who knows how to do them.

If I were Ron and Hermione, I would be rather careful about what I said and did regarding Harry. They could find themselves on his list of traitors.

"He asked about the Balstrode's, Greengrass' and Nott's" should read "He asked about the Bulstrodes, Greengrasses, and Notts." Apostrophes are not used to form plurals, except in a couple of very odd instances, and not with names.

To quote Grammar Girl: "Here's the scoop on when to use apostrophes to make things plural. (Hint: Almost never.)"

Actually, I didn't realize the Greengrasses were supporters of Voldemort. I thought they tended to be neutral. Of course, in an AU, you can make anyone you choose a DE, just like you can make anyone a good guy.

Well, that was pretty gruesome, but not undeserved for a child rapist and the woman who let it happen. I wonder ... who else knew? I'm sure anyone Harry considers complicit will be receiving a ... visit. Does that mean any Hogwarts professors? Poppy? What about Mrs. Figg?

Okay ... so Harry using Sirius's name, scrambled. Surely plenty of people (especially Hermione, if things hold true) will figure out the anagram of Salic Kubris - an odd name - especially after learning about the Voldemort anagram.

I suppose the question is why ... why would Harry use that particular name? It sounds as if he has scores to settle, some pretty heavy and violent ones. I'm curious to know his prey. Death Eaters who walked free once again? People who pretended to be friends but really weren't? People who hurt Sirius? Are there any left?

Salic Krubis ... Sirius Black? Hmmmm ... interesting title.

So how is Harry different from Voldemort? He is a dictator now, judge and jury. He murders in cold blood... and he enjoys it! He mocks his victims. This Harry deserves the death penalty himself!

LOVED EVERY WORD!
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amazing wanted a longer ending

Good story made me think of the movie "Law Abiding Citizen"
I kept thinking there was going to be a huge fight at the end with Harry/Salic getting killed.

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Hi! Me again hehehe... I hope u're well!
I just want to tell you i'm doing this translation and other 2. Strage Arregement and Snape's Real Agenda. I'm already finish the others xD
Sooo... that's all... ok, bye!

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She does realise he's insulting himself more than her