what. the. fuck.
it was good, but i- tumblr through me in for a loop

Really good story, I finished this story in 20 hours.

i am so invested in this to a degree that is concerning

This broke my heart. TT-TT

The document thing was hilarious and I really liked the ending of the chapter.

This setpiece alone is amazing, but the great battle scene made it even better. I love General Mak's initiative to move out after Zuko left with Kang.
Shura and her sons finally got what's coming for them, I'm so glad.

Awesome ending to the chapter! I'm very much looking forward to the next scene!
General Mak is becoming more and more sympathetic to me.

Well, that was about the best one-liner ever! Suki's part in this chapter was incredibly good.
Shura's plan is well thought through and there's not many ways it can go wrong, I feel.

I wasn't sure he'd go through with abdicating! That scene was amazing. The atmosphere afterwards as Zuko and the KW are ready to hunt down the smoke demons is chilling.

I really liked Suki's determination to stay stoic in the last scene.

Dark ending to the chapter! Hopefully Suki won't suffer too much...

Finally getting back to it!
Very dark chapter, I especially like the part with Suki and Zuko.

The first half was heartbreaking! I liked Mai's part at the end a lot too.

The look into Aiko's head and the way her horrible situation affects her were really captivating. The ending is tragic, of course, I wish she didn't have to die like that. Hopefully Zuko and Suki can at least get some evidence since the leader and her sons stupidly came in person

Gut-wrenching ending! I can't imagine how Zuko and Suki were feeling at the beginning of the chapter, knowing that one of their most trusted friends is (unwillingly) betraying them.