this was such a perfect balance of angst and fluff i literally have tears in my eyes. also, congratulations on being the very first author to ever make me LIKE aang. i have never, not once ever, liked him. not in the show and not in the hundreds of fics I’ve read. idk how you did it, but i thought you should know. you’re obviously a very gifted author. thank you for sharing this and of course one night in ba sing se.

Cute ending

It was nice reading some Tokka, even though Toph was depressing. I think you better portraited her in your other stories. But neverless, the fav goes!

What a beautiful way to leave your ex speechless. I'm crying

A really nice one... Is there a sequel?

Ahhhhhahahah. Zuko bursting in on that scene was so perfect. I love this story so much. And I love how understanding sokka is

Ok of course I would get to reading this full on at like 1am. I love love love love the way nothing has been said to confirm Zuko and Suki are sleeping together, but the mannerisms and behavior say it all. So good. Great description as per usual and I applaud your knack for writing really human behavior/reactions.

Gosh this story made me cry, lol. It was very well done, hit everything I look for in a fan fiction. The dialogue is realistic and in character, the characters are in character,and your writing style is perfect. Well done, well done! I look forward to reading this story again.

I knew it. I knew it almost immediately into chapter four.

I knew what I was getting into with this, but, man is it hard for me. I'm such a Zutarian that seeing them with anyone but each other is like a stab in the heart.

However, I am far more concerned with how Sokka will feel (likely similarly to how I feel about non-Zutara Zutara interaction) when Toph walks in and acts like nothing happened, because that's exactly what she's going to do, you mark my words.

Was a fucking amazing story my friend!

-Ed

I just wanted to say that you are an amazing writer. This is exactly how I would have pictured Toph and Sokka's relationship coming to fruition while including all canon aspects. You really captured the complex feelings and relationships of the Gaang, especially in your translation of their adult selves. I'm trying to say I'm in love with this story!

This is the best thing that ever happened in this website and I love you! Is there any work about what happened next? I could really read about this story forever!

"I once made a guy blow up with just my boomerang..."

This is at once the strict truth and also a horrible misrepresentation. It is also hilarious.

I'm also disappointed that you didn't screw up everyone's minds with the whole "Toph's pregnant, it's not mine, We're together now" speech of Sokka's. I imagine it'd go like this after each part.

O.o What?
Wait...what?
Wait...WHAT?!

Damn, this story was awesome!