That. Was. GREAT! Oh my frog that was magic. Not what I was expecting but that was WAY better! Awwww now I want to see it in Tori's perspective! What was he thinking about while this was happening, what exactly WAS he doing while Rin was doing all that, what was he feeling while this was going on, how did he feel when Rin said Haru made him cum (best part! Well, one of them but that's my favorite ;3 Ugh. I'm just as sick as Rin thinks himself to be); I HAVE TO KNOW! This is going to KILL me Ugh I loved it SOOOOOOOOO MUCH I'm a horrible person, I know. I just can't help it and what was that about Rin's parents saying he's not suppose to masturbate until he's older and married?! Like WHAT!? I would DIE if I couldn't. Granted, my mom said masturbating wasn't okay after I told her what I talked about with my dad but he said that it was so I'd rather trust a normal parent then one with a stick up her ass any day :D Thankfully I've never been caught doing it so she doesn't know. But anywho, sorry for getting off topic but I couldn't handle that when I read it because I felt EXACTLY like Rin! I'm bi so it adds to the fire -hearts- Can't help my love for girls ;3 Anyway! PLEASE think about making another chapter or sequel to this in Tori's perspective...and maybe what happens between them afterwards...? I'm sorry! TTATT I just can't help it, it was too great. Please think about it and if not then that's totally fine, I would never want to pressure you. Loved this! I hope to read more of your work soon hun!