Awwwww

This is story was so sweet

Good plot. There was only one thing that bothered me in this chapter. You said Sakura was a slut in bed. This statement doesn't make any sense and it was said in an offensive way, like she was less of a woman or didn't deserve consideration just because she acted wildly in bed.
It was pretty disrespectful what you said. So what if she loved to have sex with lots of people? It is her life and her body. Slut is not supposed to be a demeaning term.
Anyways, it always annoyed me to see guys criticizing girls who are free to take what they want in bed... this sexual repression is ridiculous. A man should be proud to see his partner free and natural. Who wants a cold fish?
I wish you changed those statements.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

oh my god! I'm crying here! please consider writing a sequel? Pleaase?

Oh is this the end?

Geeezus that's so freaking romantic. I can't even handle the romance pheromones wafting from my screen. Help me!

Awwwww! Does this mean it's gonna be an itasaku fic now? great job!

...well that escalated quickly...lol constructive criticism, in all honesty after the 3rd chapter I felt like everything started to get too rushed. Though I liked where the story was going initially, the climb towards the climax until the end could have used a little more detail and developing. Good job anyways, and thanks for the story!

First few chapters were good. They were developed and the story was interesting. But that ended pretty fast. It went downhill and frankly what a cheesy, droll, and predictable ending. I feel like it was a good effort and that your writing has promise; and that it will get better as you write. Things that should be focused on are: the story, you need a strong idea that will lead us from one point to the next and still being able to hold ate interest, story development is going to help out a lot. Plan, organize, and think out everything that you want to happen in your chapter your writing. Sometimes only focusing on how one chapter goes will give you leeway to change or add ideas to future chapters while still having a general idea for your story. Or planning everything from the beginning and not derailing from it. This story had a strong beginning but ended badly, it was sloppy and it was the story and idea that just didn't get enough time to come together or was original. I don't mean to be flaming or anything just a stranger giving a critique. I still want to say good job.

this was great!

This fic started out so well. It held a lot of promise, but towards the last few chapters, it seemed kind of rushed. Still appreciate your effort.

You. Scared the flying cows out of me. Omg. Not cool. But YAY YOU for making a happy ending!

Only one chapter left :(
I have to know what happened! I love this story!

O my gosh! Nooooo! Im desperatley looking for the next button for chap 8'! XD Great job again!