I love how you didn't make him move the water around in the air like in shapes and stuff like I've seen others do it- just 'cause I don't think that's how Percy's powers work. I love your version of how he told him and I love how you've kept them pretty in-character. Thank you :)

love percy jackson and that 70s show omg and percy loving it just makes him so much better

Nice. Very realistic, and it seemed a pretty natural length.

Great story! Update.

Lol at Paul thinking Percy is coming out to him XD.

I just hope Paul gets to see Percy fight a monster! he would be all like, OMG...
update soon!

I loved this chapter!

Hope you get the chance to update soon! I do think Paul should have family. Maybe a sister and brother? They should be older than him, too. Great start! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hurry!

I really like this story so far, and yes, I do think that you should include a family for Paul. Please update soon!

this was great! looooooved it :)

I loved this chapter!

In your 1st paragraph, I think you meant delinquent. Not diligent.

Good story update soon :)

Hi!
It's not bad, but I think it needs a bit more of improvement. Don't forget to check for typos (I think you've written 'me3et' instead of 'meet'). I also suggest you not to use abbreviations like 'outta' in the text; full words are more agreable to read and it shows better writing skills.
Good luck with the next chapters!