great story

Great Story! Please keep writing!

love it, more soon!

Love this story! Please update soon.

Omg read this in one go one word amazing this is such a realistic story can defiantly imagine this on tv dandy are so cute together Hope u keep writing I need something to cling on to during the long hiatus brilliant work thanks for sharing

Very witty writing.

This latest chapter is good! Very real can't wait to read more!

i loved this chapter! especially the dialogue between Peter and Jeremy cause i can just imagine that is how it would actually play out.
I couldn't stop laughing at the 'Danny is missing!' part, i can just imagine it.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

I LOVED THE FIRST 3 CHAPTERS! But this last chapter felt rushed. I like the build up of figuring out how this relationship is going to work. It shouldn't be so easy for them to have sex. It's Mindy and Danny. It's suppose to be sloppy and awkward yet loving and sweet. It needs to be a moment we are on the edge of our seat for. This a roller coaster a thrill ride pacing builds this moments to the best it can be. Also I could hear each character's voice in the first two chapters clearly. It was great, I felt like was watching the an actual episode. Now by the third chapter you're writing changed and it was missing something. It didn't sound like Mindy Project banter. It was close but off. I like the scene between Mindy and Peter. That's a fun dynamic to explore as always. The scene with Cliff was to easy but that tends to happen on TMP with brake ups. Looking forward to finding out what happened with Jetsey! But overall great stuff keep it up. Can't wait to read more if you've got it!

Perfectly adorable!

This is really cute so far. I love the Peter Mindy friendship too. There is even some Jetsey!

I like this! I am very intrigued as to where you are taking to and can't wait to read more.

I really enjoyed reading this, there is just one problem. Mindy, Danny, and Jeremy are joint partners at Shulman and Associates. They are the higher us, they own the practice. I realize this is just a story, but to me that took away from part of what makes the show great. The bosses are the nutty ones!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

love this story!

Excellent! I could see the next episode going this way exactly. Loved it!