The plot of this story is really interesting but the only thing that bothers me is the first person POV. I'm sure you'd had a lot more readers if you'd changed that.

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Love this story I love the plot and everything please update soon I need to know what happens!

Love the story line. Love that Emma is so smart and has such loyalty to her family. Can't wait to see how she and Hook develop with each other. And of course the smut lol

Please update soon!

I really like this story so far and I look forward to reading more

Love the characterization of Hook and Emma. Only presents itself to true love huh? Very interesting... lol and Emma spends a whole year with Hook and she betrays him so easily? I don't think so. She will totally change her mind and see the error of her ways. She loves her family but if they are true love then he well support her effort to help her family. This is great! I'm so excited to see more of it! Something tells me Hook is going to be dashing and amazingly sexy. Lol great story more soon please!

Please continue

Love it! Oh Hook you are so dashing already! Lol true loves kiss huh? Yay love it! A whole year Emma? I'm pretty sure she has got to be pretty head over heels at that point and end up having a change of heart after her betrayal. Especially bc it's Killian. Lol

please with a swan on top continue ;)

Loved it. Update soon.

Please continue!

Definitely continue! Can't wait for more!

pls continue :)