Well done! I really enjoyed the song at the end. Music is one of my favorite thins to listen to, and I enjoy it just as much as I enjoy reading. Hope to see more fanfics from you in the future!

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Chvrches's "The Mother We Share", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator

Really liked the song

Your stories are always so beautifully written. They have such a poetic quality, it's like reading artwork. I loved this intimate look at a quiet moment between Elsa and Anna. Their relationship is so intriguing to me. Wonderful ficlet exploring this sisterly reconnection!

Nicely done! I like your inclusion of that song, too. As time goes by, I'm sure that Anna and Elsa will work very hard to repair their relationship. Even after 13 years of separation from each other, they never stopped loving each other, as sisters should. :)