I knew it! I knew Sycamore was going to turn her in! That bastard, how could he betray her like that?!

I just wanted to say WOW! This was an amazing story, it kept me on edge the whole time and I loved the fact that you did tackle heavy themes. It was wonderful; your stories are great!

Man, it's been such a long time since I've read this...I want to reread it yet I'd love to read a sequel or prequel xD Seeing their romance develop as Serene saves Kalos would be an awesome story

I really don't mean to pressure, but are you gonna come back to something like that? o;

That was seriously amazing! 3

sorry for ruining your story and you know there is something called alternate endings right

*applauses* Nice ending! I'm gonna miss reading this story...

man i hope serena gets my package that i sent out to her before lumiouse was destroyed

This story - seriously - it's just so, so, so, great! I really, really, love it - your ways of describing the smallest details which makes the reader able to imagine the places are just incredible.

For the story; how I feel sorry for Serena - she did everything she could - actually her story reminds me about AZ's now - are you going to bring him in? I know I said that bringing the legendaries would be over doing it, but bringing in Xerneas would make perfectly sense since it's the pokémon to give life. Of course, it's your story, you don't have to mind what I tell you, but that could be a way to make Serena be the hero again. I imagine her not being that popular, when people finds out about that she accidentally destroyed Lumiose :)

... oh my... I'm speechless. In a good way.

Woot! Glad to see you're back!

You do not realize how much I was smiling while reading(even though most of this chapter was so tense and serious), and I'm just so relieved that Serena is somewhat out of the woods. I'll be waiting for the next update!

God, you're killing me. First, you"kill" her off in a cliffhanger ending. Then, you don't update for a while. Then, she's alive again, yet no one can see her, but I'm finding your narrative trying to trick the reader, so she might be dead (but fingers crossed). Quit it, you troll! . (jkjk)
That aside, I didn't think it was possible to make a chapter mostly taking place in a waiting room readable. Usually, it's a cliche like a myriad of memories flashing through a lover's mind, or painfully watching the injured person go through surgery, etc. I like how while Sycamore's thoughts and perspective were prioritized, other peoples' angst were set into view, and not solely melancholic. (Does that make sense? I'm writing this at about midnight without much sleep).
I'd say I'm looking forward to the next one, but I'm not so sure I can handle any more "twists," as subtle as that last one was (to me). But seriously, keep it up. Glad to see that the story is back, even though it's almost over, and I kinda don't want it to end XD

you know what ampharos for once im made an account so expect serious reviews from now on

/screaming

My sweet, beautiful angst appears again. To be honest I was expecting Augustine to pull a heroic rescue but, heck, there's still time for that! Still, wow, what a note to leave off on. I'm excited to see what happens next.

AMPHAROS, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!

Dammit - you're rude to end it there and not coming back for weeks! :P Omg - this is getting so intense! Again - can't wait for next chapter :)