Very good story, hope you will release a new chapter soon

So are you still planning to update soon? I crying here why oh why.

ok I lost are you purposely switching who's older or Younger here

Update! Please!

Will you be updating this story soon? Please do I really like this story!

I need to correct u a bit on this chapter, scientifically identical twins are born from the same 'sack' while fraternal twins are born from different 'sacks.' that part u got it correctly, however another fact is that, identical twins means both organism/being/individual contained in the 'sack' are biologically 90-99% of the time almost identical, means it's impossible for identical twins, born from the same 'sack' to have different genders. I'm a biologists, i love reading fantasies, but at the same time, I will correct people's views on this with facts. Sorry for the long rant but good chapter otherwise.

I need to correct u a bit on this chapter, scientifically identical twins are born from the same 'sack' while fraternal twins are born from different 'sacks.' that part u got it correctly, however another fact is that, identical twins means both organism/being/individual contained in the 'sack' are biologically 90-99% of the time almost identical, means it's impossible for identical twins, born from the same 'sack' to have different genders. I'm a biologists, i love reading fantasies, but at the same time, I will correct people's views on this with facts. Sorry for the long rant but good chapter otherwise.

This was pretty decent, but there were a ton of issues with the grammar and spelling, I suggest getting a beta reader for that.

hey please hurry up and update

I like how this story is going and would love to read more of it

i just hope tsuna notices the poison

pleeeeease update~ i want to know what's going to happen next...please i don't want this story to be abandoned. i really love this

Interesting story. But at some parts there seems to be missing parts in the sentences, such as "Tsuna sat down far in end while the twins" and then there is nothing to complete it. Also, be on the lookout for gramatical errors or other missing words, otherwise this story is intriguing and I'm eager to read more.

I think you should probably check your grammar and spelling. Other than that, the story is pretty decent.

...so I take it these are abandoned? That's sad. I wish they weren't. If you ever decide to post again I'd be really happy! I love mama-Tsuna.