Reviews for Submit your own Demigod- The Half Blood School
Riptide chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Name: Bethany Olton
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Godly Parent: Poseidon
Hair color: Gold
Hair style: Amine pigtails
Complexion: Pale
Height: 5'10
Eye color: Violet
Other appearance stuff: Skinny and bendy
History: Grew up in England
Non Godly Parent: Rachel Olton
Siblings?: None
Personality: Touchy
Type of people would have crush on: None, wants to join the Hunters
Type of friends would have: Smart/Athena and Hephaestus.
Best subject: Gym
Worst Subject: Latin
Sport?: Beach Volleyball
Weapon: Bow and quiver (Susan, Chronicles of Narnia)
Clubs: Swimming
Labels (like popular or rebel): Rebel
Sleep wear: Pale pink and white stripe pyjamas.
Daily wear: White and blue beaded top decorated with sea creatures (usually seahorses and dolphins), blue short shorts, green Sarong with seashell clip, open toe sandals.
Casual party wear: Blue top, white skort, closed toe sandals.
Formal wear: Floor length blue silk gown with green bead decor and seashell belt with silver wedge sandals.
Anything else?: No.
Riptide chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Name: Bethany Olton

Gender: Female

Godly Parent: Poseidon

Age: 13

Hair color: Golden

Hair style: Long, wavy, amine.

Complexion: Pale

Height: 4'10

Eye color: Violet

Other appearance stuff: Skinny and bendy.

History: Was born in America but was moved to England. She came back to America on her tenth birthday.

Non Godly Parent: Rachel Oltin

Siblings?: None

Personality: Always quiet but can flip out when she gets even the slightest bit upset.

Powers (max 4): Earthquakes, horses, Shape shifting, underwater dry/breathing/not dead.

Weaknesses (min 4): Her family, her English accent, her looks, her weapon.

Dreams: Can't get them as she trains her mind to give her bad news in the form,of visions.

Type of people would have a crush on: Loyal people

Type of friends would have: Smart people.

Best subject: P.E

Worst Subject: Latin

Sport?: Volleyball

Weapon: Bow and magic quiver that fosent run out if arrows (Susans in the Chroicles of Narnia)

Clubs:

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Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
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Non Godly Parent: Mortal
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Gummienummie chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
Anya
17
Hades
Black with red
5'8
Pretty much a Nico Thailia mix personally
Dress in black and blue shirt and dark jeans
Anything to a party
Sleep in shorts and a tank top
Has o puppy named Oreo
And a wolf tattoo
Smarties chapter 2 . 7/29/2015
I just did my demigod for the school and I forgot to add the label:

Label: Nerdy Rebel
Smarties chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
1: Lily McKinley
2: Female
3: Athena
4: Black
5: Mid-back wavy
6: Light/Tan
7: 5' 8"
8: Gray, rimmed with blue
9: average
10: She was stuck up with her father packed a backpack and ran away when she was 13. She found a stayer that brought her to CHB (you can make up the rest)
11: Dean McKinley
12: None
13: Outgoing, brave, smart, happy, bright
14: very smart, can summon owls, very good with a sword, very quick on feet
15: SPIDERS! Hellhounds, Lava, Water (sometimes), Death
16: World Famous Astro Engineer, to save lives
17: Good looking, funny, not too smart but smart,goofy, gentleman to me
18: Everyone except bullies and people whom are jealous and girly mean cheerleaders
19: English
20: Social Studies
21: Softball
22: sword
23: Drama, Science Olympiad, Spelling Bee, Book Club
24: Loose Shorts and T-shirt
25: Jeans, T-shirt and Converse or Jean shorts, tank top and converse
26: Skinny Jeans, Fancy Tank-Top and sometimes fancy sweater
27: Black skirt, nice shirt and heels or flats or dress and heels or flats
28: Loose T-shirt and Nike Pros or Leggings

This is my demigod. I hope this is PM. I am new to this
alternatived chapter 17 . 7/31/2014
I don't want to be a hypocrite (cuz I suck at updating too) but please please update soon! I love this story!
Princess Of Flames chapter 17 . 6/25/2014
Interesting chapter.

Song "In the End" i can't remember who sang it though. Maybe Linkin Park?
Princess Of Flames chapter 16 . 6/25/2014
Great chapter.

Play can be A Midsummer Night Dream by Shakespeare or maybe Changling?
Emperor- Ryan
King- Noah
Queen- Nikki
AbsolutelyNoClue chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Alyss Valentine Young (Irish last name)
Nicknames: Al, Val, Valentine (hates being called Val/Valentine)
Female
Apollo
16 (Birthday: Nov 11th)
Black hair
Smooth, absolutely no curls, down to shoulder blades, behind left ear, bangs covering right eye (only if down, which is really rarely)
In ponytail (practically always): behind ears, bangs covering right eye
there's one single light blue streak in the bangs
Slightly tanned, olive skinned
5'7"
Electric blue eyes (darkens with mood) and there are dark rings under eyes from depression or lack of sleep
Not too tall, skinny but slightly muscular and is strong, very fast runner, and usually has pencil marks all over hands due to always writing or sketching. Tattoo of "FP2K14" on right arm, and faded cuts on wrist and back hand (note: palm is officially front) from self harm.
Each of the cuts (three horizontal with one vertical through one to create a cross. two vertical on back hand. sorry so much detail .') represents the people who've hurt Alyss the most, and the vertical lines count as how many large heartbreaks. you may add more cuts any which way you like :P
Can never sleep well, since is haunted by depression and the past, and people who hurt her. noticably sleeps better when hearing someone's heartbeat, like sleeping on someone's chest. this is because all she remembers is a father abandoning her, a mother dying when she was four, her brother and sister murdered while on the run, and the closest friend she ever had dying of cancer. very dark past. had a major heartbreak (the cut in a cross) just a year back, and is now afraid to be in a relationship.
Mother: Amanda Young
Siblings:
Simon Young (age of death was 11)
Brooke Young (age of death was 9)
Lone wolf aka Black Hawk Omega chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Name: Lee Walker

Gender: guy

Godly parent: Khione

Age: 18

Hair color: black/blue it's a mix

Hair style: spikey

Complexion: pale

Height: average

Eye color: black and blue, just like his hair

Other appearance: Lee has a tattoo on his neck of a snow flake. Lee has a six pack and is very fit.

History: Lee Walker, was born in Lousiana, New Orleans, his dad was an alcoholic and he had a bad childhood. Lee has a gambling addiction and hangs out with the wrong crowd. Lee is fiercely loyal to his mother, Khione. He strongly dislikes the Olympians. He can also speak French. He owns a vincet black shadow motercycle and rides it to go to places. He would have fought for Kronos and Gaea. He enjoys playing guitar.

Non godly parent: Alexander Walker

Siblings: none

Personality: Lee is antisocial and tends to be a loner. He is a babe magnet all the girls seem to love him.

Powers: power over snow, never feels the cold, can create things out of snow and ice.

Weaknesses: Lee hates the heat and prefers the cold.

Dreams: Lee normally has nightmares about his father who would beat him when he was younger.

Type of people he'd have a crush on: Probably Reyna for example. You chose who he crushes on. Prefibly somone who hates the gods as well.

Type of friends: Lee tends to hang out with the other minor god children. He doesn't talk much to people.

Best subject: don't really care you decide.

Worst subjects: geography

Sport: Hockey he gets it from that guy who's a son of Boreas who loves hockey. I think his name is Carl.

Weapon: crossbow, is his preferred weapon. He also can use knives.

Clubs: Doesn't really do clubs he's usually hanging in some night club playing music. He's really popular as a musician.

Label: Rebe

Sleep wear: he sleeps shirtless in only a pair of sweat pants.

Daily wear: tends to wear black ripped up skinny jeans, black combat boots, and a dark blue or black muscle shirt. He also wears fingerless gloves.

Casual wear: the same thing as his daily wear.

Formal clothing: he wears a black button up shirt, with a dark blue formal vest. Black formal pants, and his black combat boots.

Training clothing: tends to train in black shorts and a dark blue muscle shirt. He also wears combat boots. He's training with a crossbow so he doesn't really need to wear a lot of training gear. He tends to train by himself in the woods.

That's it please include my charcter!
Charlie chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Charles Lee(prefers to be called Charlie)
Male
Poseidon/Neptune
16
Dark black
Spikey
Tanned
5'9"
Ocean Green
Athletic build
I don't like talking about my history it was to ...
My mom
10 (2 with the same dad but in his roman mind)
Friendly easy to love
Water manipulation, Talk to horses, earth quakes,animal shiftier (prefers wolves)
ADHD, Dyslexia , (main one) Loyal to a fault
Strong girls
almost any good person
Math( because the numbers don't go everywhere dam dyslexia)
English(no words they hate me)
Swimming
Bow and arrow , and sword
anything athletic club
rebel
Boxers
tshirt, shorts, jeans, wife beaters, anything comfy
nice jeans and a tshirt
dress shirt and pants
my Armour jeans and a tshirt
my head hurts right now after reading this
AngelOfTheMad chapter 17 . 6/3/2014
Song for JJ: "The Geeks Will Inherit The Earth" by I Fight Dragons. And yes, I am sniperjun899, I just changed my name
Oreh Keats chapter 17 . 6/2/2014
For Noah - Turning Page by Sleeping At Last
Harmonic Bunny chapter 17 . 6/2/2014
For Elysia...Shattered by Trading Yesterday.
I think it's mostly because she doesn't have much of a "family", and she doesn't want to admit it...and a lot of other unnecessary details. I'll tell you on PM if you want to know, though.
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