This is a great story. I love the touching moment between Adrian and Sharona. And I love the description of Sharona's type and how Adrian fits that description, but she just hasn't realized it yet. I'd love to read more from you.

"Yeah, Sharona. Be careful. Why don't you listen to the man with the freakish powers of observation every once in a while? "

Perfect!

A fine epilog. You've captured the characters well. Please write more.

At the risk of sounding like a white "hipster" (God, I'm showing my age (15). "Hipster"? Shudder.) that kicked ass. Write more Monk, becuase you are good at it. (I would use larger words but I can't spell.)

You would think she would learn. I give it two more seasons before she figures it out!

This was wonderful! I'd love to see this scene play out in the series! :) Looking forward to reading more of your work!

-Dalliann

Awww! This is cute. I like it. Continue?

-RianaRogue

great story! I am a HUGE fan of Monk and this is really good. It actually sounds like something Sharona would say. Oooh, I can translate it!

'Mine! Mine all! Not! These characters belong to USA and -'

That was good! Almost- almost like a song, how u said "know better" a few times thruout the fic, kinda like a chorus, n then u ended w/ it... Yeah, like a song. Not 2 give u a big head/anything. Keep writing, tho I kno this was a one-shot fic.

Great story! But, I don't want Sharona to know better; I just love it when Monk rescues her!

Oh, was a wonderful story! I get so excited every time there's a new one! Great observations about her taste in men by the way. Very intriguing!