Update soon, please! I love this fic! :D

Nice :)

Yep, would love to know what "really" happened.

Its a different approach to the whole Scabior and Hermione pairing. I like it.

I really liked it. I love this pairing, but there's not enough stories for the two of them :(

This is amazing! Please continue it!

Well, this was interesting and I can say that I've never read anything like it before. Hermione wandering off into the forest to *cough* release some tension... XD The idea of it cracked me up.

If not for the author's notes, I wouldn't have known who the man she is fantasizing about was supposed to be - there are so little details about it in the fic that it could be anyone.

Your grammar is mostly good but you switch back and forth between past and present tense. You should pick on tense and stick with it for the whole narration.

I'd love a sequel to this!

Would love to read a continuation for this. Great work for a short story.