| Reviews for The Other Uzumaki |
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lara5170 chapter 11 . 3/11 I wish there was more of this |
wtf chapter 11 . 7/29/2018 you should of made her kill the dumb red eye fuck if it was me id kill the bastard and rip his fucking eyes out and smash them with a rock then pour some lamp oil on the body and set it on fire fucking hate how you made those two get together after he kill her brother that's just messed up and fucking sick fucking hate this story it's fucking trash |
cora bug chapter 11 . 8/12/2017 Continue the story please! I want to see kids and sasuke as a dad |
Titania1796 chapter 11 . 5/23/2015 puedes hacer una secuela que sea mpreg por favor puedes |
TheBeauty chapter 11 . 4/12/2015 Wonderful ending. Although after reading the summary and there being fem Naruto I thought for a moment that Naruto somehow survived and was pretending... |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/3/2015 I loved this so much! |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/13/2015 Well, I liked the story (even thought not everything seemed reasonable, like the instant love between Sasu and Naru, but hey, this is a fanfiction. Let's not forget about author's choice of developement xD). It was cute to read and I kind of cheered for a happy end with them BOTH alive and happily ever after etc. Hope you will keep up with the good work and thank you for the story :) |
Rikku209 chapter 11 . 11/24/2014 I liked it |
Bittersweet4137 chapter 11 . 7/16/2014 didn't feel like logging in but thats my actual account name. But honestly do you go around deleting negative reviews for this story because i couldn't have been the only who thought it was awful. I just fail to understand how you make all the characters in the story forget or undermine the fact that sasuke killed naruto...in cold blood with no real pitying excuse that you could have made for him. Then you take his twin sister and have her fall for the man who killed her brother with no good character, plot, or emotional development that could justify how disgusting this was all put together. This isn't a flame though because all things considering the development of this story was truthfully terrible and the writing grammar and formation could all use a lot of work also. |
Lady Michiko chapter 11 . 4/7/2014 will they're be a next chapter? if yes please continue i love the story :D |
Kathalla chapter 11 . 3/10/2014 I love this story soo much ... great job! |
chloemika chapter 11 . 3/10/2014 Such a cute chapter! Loved it so much |
Phoenix Ninja 15 chapter 10 . 3/5/2014 Sooooo... What does Sakura do when she finds out? And I kind of still want her to get pregnant. |
GravityJinx chapter 9 . 3/5/2014 OMG I wanna see what happens next! Please update soon! |
idea.getthe chapter 9 . 3/3/2014 I don't get the first paragraph "She watched as Sasuke Uchiha died in front of her eyes." Is this a mistake? |