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Guest chapter 32 . 4/22/2019 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww omg i'm crying! |
Guest chapter 22 . 4/13/2019 Squish Squish... I'm sorry. |
Morino chapter 20 . 9/25/2018 Lol They're making deals. But yush Gruvia and Nalu It's a combo |
nullaccount23422 chapter 5 . 6/18/2018 I'm really enjoying the content so far, but one small point of criticism is that you gotta learn to use line breaks for dialogue. It makes it much much easier on the reader. Instead of : "Another job done!" Lucy said. Natsu chuckled and nodded. "Hey Natsu. Despite almost starving to death, I actually had fun being trapped in that cave with you." Lucy said to Natsu. Natsu looked at Lucy with a big grin. "You're weird Luce! But I did too." he said. She smiled at him. "We still didn't make a snowman!" Lucy said. "Can't we just head home?" he asked. "But it'll be your first snowman! It'll be so cute!" she said with glee. "And we can have a snowball fight and we can make snow angles!". "How are you not sick of the snow already?" Natsu chuckled. It should look like this: "Another job done!" Lucy said. Natsu chuckled and nodded. "Hey Natsu. Despite almost starving to death, I actually had fun being trapped in that cave with you." Lucy said to Natsu. Natsu looked at Lucy with a big grin. "You're weird Luce! But I did too." he said. She smiled at him. "We still didn't make a snowman!" Lucy said. "Can't we just head home?" he asked. "But it'll be your first snowman! It'll be so cute!" she said with glee. "And we can have a snowball fight and we can make snow angles!". "How are you not sick of the snow already?" Natsu chuckled. |
ABT4Life chapter 32 . 6/14/2018 This story left me so satisfied. I love how everything comes together and even having a bad date and fights. Lord knows this happens with my husband and I. I appreciate the thought you took in this story. Really trying to understand how each character would ask in a situation we don’t see them in thoroughout the Anime and Manga. Thank you for your work. |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/9/2018 Hey man this the best fanfiction I ever read I can't stop reading it |
gamersweetheart chapter 31 . 8/8/2017 She's such a b&$)h in this chapter my gosh poor Natsu |
gamersweetheart chapter 2 . 8/8/2017 The story would be much easier to read if you started a new line each time someone talked |
gamersweetheart chapter 1 . 8/8/2017 Hahahha "I'm manly as hell" |
lulian chapter 32 . 7/4/2017 it was amazzzzzzzing i loved it |
imagination l exploration chapter 1 . 6/30/2017 kawaii! |
ryanhopsgaming chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 . ?inviteCode4522531&clientTypeoppoos&redirectUrl .com |
Epitaxis chapter 1 . 4/19/2017 Smut, smut, smut... |
Lol chapter 7 . 10/12/2016 Love to :D |
Lol chapter 3 . 10/12/2016 Awesome |