A good chapter, and I look forward to what you have planned in the next one. Naruto could also teach Levy a bit of Ice Magic too, and it looks like Laxus and his team fought against a demon of some sort maybe

Glad that Naruto and Sasuke finally got their dream girls, and how they also activated their Dragon Force

Typical Orochimaru, looking forward to how disappointed he'll be

This is a good start, and I look forward to how it goes

so far i liked the story! hopefully sasuke will end up Ultear later on story! but guess I have to find out further by reading

Not the ramen!

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

No not the thunder legion

Thank you so much for continuing this story.

I am so glad you're back doing this story.
The author who tried to adopt it was changing too much. they wanted to change the pairing when NaruLevy is already such a rare pairing.

So when is the new version of the story coming also I think it would have been cool if narcotics and his sister reunited early on in the story and worked together with their revived mother to look for their father

when any author feels the need to put any naruto character other then naruto and not make them die or have a small reacuring character it ruins the crossover aspect of the story because what purpose does sasuke have that another character can not fulfill like you have the perfect character with grey and him bieng his moms apprentice gives you the perfect opportunity for character development there and a great rival for him.

good story, I hope you continue, a greeting, we read, bye. !

No! I was hoping to see the fighting between gajeel and team shadowgear plus wendy. Gajeel made the biggest mistake of his life lol.

Not bad, this was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it, things are getting serious now although i want ultear to be her evil canon self until either naruto or minato snaps her out of it but this works too. But speaking of minato, does he not know if ultear is alive or something because he seems more concerned about naruto (whos completely safe mind you) and ur (who he knew wasn't going anywhere until he discovered that she was moved). Yet his daughter is in the clutches of his parents' killer so it would make sense for him to think she's dead however what doesn't make sense is how he was able to keep tabs on naruto but not ultear considering that naruto was teleported from that place he and ultear was held captive without any trace as to where he went by kesskou. But anyways it was a great chapter so good job.

-_-' christ i hope this is the last magic naruto gets and that ultear is just as strong as naruto.