| Reviews for The Hearts of Kings |
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   Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn chapter 11 . 12/21/2019 Well this is quite the story. I'm quite curious as to what will happen next, so please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/22/2016 It had begun... Reminds me of the epic line in mortal kombat... It has begun! Can't wait for an update :) keep up the awesome |
| Zyenna chapter 11 . 4/9/2016 Ooooh goodness! I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Bilbo and the army make it in time? Pleeeeaaaaase update soon! |
| killer4853 chapter 2 . 11/6/2015 like |
| RedBear5 chapter 1 . 5/23/2015 Te and tir kill me. They're jarring, pulling me out of the flow of reading. They serve no cultural purpose as a formal name, are not a new action like a spell or sword technique and don't indicate another language, as they are the only created names in the sentence. Switching he/his for your own terms is a very poor choice for readability. Other than this glaring fault, it looks like this could have been a good story; but I'm unable to even complete the first chapter. Sorry Red Bear |
| I heart vamps chapter 11 . 5/17/2015 Please update soon |
| punky warhammer chapter 11 . 4/19/2015 eeeeeeeeeeeee! good stuff! please more soon! thank you! |
| punky warhammer chapter 8 . 4/19/2015 *GASP* CH. 7 you forgot second breakfast! (pointy accusing finger) but other wise a wonderful story and i will keep reading ;) |
| randomplotbunny chapter 11 . 1/27/2015 Fantastic! Can't wait for more! |
| Sting7777 chapter 11 . 1/26/2015 You have quiet a lot going on in this story, and yet it all fits together beautifully. I'm really curious about why Azog was exiled. Can't wait to read more! |
| I heart vamps chapter 10 . 1/20/2015 Please update soon |
| Americandude2926 chapter 10 . 12/24/2014 This is amazing! Please continue this story! |
| Teapot of transformation chapter 10 . 5/2/2014 Thanks for updating. Like what you're doing with Azog and Kili. |
| randomplotbunny chapter 10 . 4/30/2014 This story is so absolutely amazing! I can't wait for more! |
| won't be the Victim chapter 10 . 4/29/2014 Awesome story! Couldn't stop reading it! :D Can't wait for more :) |
