Great story really liked it. Wish they had more screen time together before they broke up.

love it.

I really like that you changed this scene a bit. I was so heartbroken for Katie and Kelly. I really wish she'd return to Chicago! I thought her relationship with Kelly and Otis and everyone at 51 was incredible and so genuine. Anyways, thanks for writing! I love this series. Good luck with your other stories!

Lovely fic, going for the sequel right now!

Oh the angsty ups and downs. Great story! glad I took the time to read it and I will def make time to read the next one in the series. Glad they worked past their little insecurities. hmmm well got past for the most part lol that's still a work in progress. love the whump/hurt/comfort. Pssst I think Erin could be a Sevasey fan haha ;) Thanks for the great read my dear!

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Glad to see Shay and Erin makeup - of sorts and hey they have a very special common denominator - Kelly so they had to work it out for the long run! hmm I think he's in love. But yup I think they are the same...blow hot and cold but with deeper feelings deep inside ;)

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haha sorry had to comment on Erin's taste in movie's mine too! ugh sappy chick flicks - such a fail! and yup I like her way of nursing him back to health ;)

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*phew* I knew you wouldn't kill Kelly but dang woman! glad he's okay but yup about to be raked over the coals? hmm not sure b/c it was a selfless act motivated by love for his sister. okay still stupid lol just glad he's okay! And yup Jay - sorry. ;)

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oh two stubborn people! took this to bring them back together. luckily ;) but ugh so bittersweet! I know they'll find Katie and can't wait to see how this plays out.

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dang you shot Kelly instead! *evil grin* lol yup love the whump but dang their argument. two hot heads for sure. interested to see how they patch this up.

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Oh I love all the mental thoughts they each are having toward the other. humorous but I can totally see it. Glad the first date went well but I love the tension and danger in here but dang the ending!

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Had some time to read so started with this one and already am liking it :) Can feel the angsty tension (ugh jay go away lol) Very interested to see where the rest of this goes :)

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We know this isn't going to end well for poor Katie, if Keeler has her.

Lol, really do love those two together! Oh, geez, can't wait to get to the next chapter!

Another fantastic chapter. Sorry Erin was shot, but I'm sure Kelly saved her from far worse injury. Now he'll get to look after her, at least for a couple of days, while he's off.