It was a good story, well written. May I point out 1 little thing? Halfway this chapter you mistake Brianna with her sister Katelyn. You wrote that Katelyn found her mate in the son of Carly, Brett. Then you talk about Brianna who found Colt, but halfway you say that Katelyn and Colt are mates and they marry. I think you meant Brianna and Colt, who got married.

Is Bella goona get pregnant!? Oh shit...

He needs to fuckin’ suffer ‘ore

Love it!

Ugh. You do know there’s a way to show how badass he is without interjecting fuck fuckin’ fucking every sentence? Seriously, I’m disappointed. This could’ve been so much better without adding over forty fucks in a single chapter. I hope it improves :(

Bella reminds me of Goddess of Chaos

I love the story but just wanted to point out that you gave Katelyn 2 mates: Brett & Colt. You first said Brianna met a human Colt but then you started calling her Katelyn.

the originals a spin off of the vampire diaries Nathan parsons and phoebe Tonkin the werewolf girl lol

Thank you for sharing. I love jasper and Bella.

I love this story and have re read it many times but I'm still holding out for the rest and to know what the witlocks have up their sleeves

I was really enjoying reading this into all chapter 19 when pregnancy notes I do not know if I want to go to Prince carry on reading I find the pregnancy just get a bit boring after a while and I find that the character they have developed over time they just get too soppy auntie Sabie

This was such an interesting story I was unable to stop thank u so much for sharing

Another amazing story

I absolutely loved this story. I enjoyed this jasper and Bella a lot. I couldn’t put the story down.

I really wanted to like this. I truly did. By Chapter 10 I was losing interest and by Chapter 24/24 I was confused.