| Reviews for Next Steps |
|---|
Oluhasuu chapter 1 . 7/2/2014 that's one of the things I wondered when I saw hiccup's leg, the desing something too...different for being of only gobber you know? |
midnightsky0612 chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 Awesome |
Riya Morut chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 Great story! I really enjoyed the easy camaraderie between Gobber and Stoick. You captured their friendship perfectly, in my opinion. Gobber's whole attitude is also impressive. I can easily see him being the forgiving sort. One line that really stood out was when Gobber said one day Hiccup wouldn't remember what it was like to have a leg. That really made me pause, because it's so true. We never think of kids losing limbs, do we? Your writing really flows well, and this is one of the rare times when I have no constructive criticism! Great job. :D |
sauara chapter 1 . 2/24/2014 Amazing |
Nyxelestia chapter 1 . 2/23/2014 Cute perspective. Love the bit with the axe at the beginning, and how Hiccup's prosthetic is actually based off one of his own designs. :) |
Book girl fan chapter 1 . 1/23/2014 Hiccup is definitely going to make an impressive chief one day, and will have some wonderful stories to tell his children. I hope you don't mind me continuing to archive your stories? |
K9grmingTwihard chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 I just love this story. You've captured Stoic and Gobber beautifully. I hope you write more like this especially during Hiccup's sleep/coma. |
DoomsdayBeamXD chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet sweet (I'm not going to stop soon so let's say . . . . Five hours late) . . . Sweet sweet sweet and sweet, wow that was a lot XD I LUVED DIS (insert a thousand screams) |
Tasermon's Partner chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 One of the best Goober/Stoick fics I've read. You've captured their personalities greatly, with Gobber's wise and forgiving ways, and Stoick's slow acceptance and great respect. Good concept on Hiccup having been the one to originally design the leg for Gobber. That's the first I've read of a concept like that, and I'm surprised that nobody else thought of it sooner. Very original and genius! Good dialogue and interactions, please write more soon! |
kitty.0 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 I really REALLY like the way you wrote this. I love your interpretation for what happened while Hiccup was asleep and the feelings you put in this. |
Kristen Sharpe chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 Oh, yes! I'd been wanting to see more of this friendship, and getting it coupled with such a lovely "missing" scene from the movie's end just ices the cake. And, randomly, I'm looking forward to seeing the sequel address the matter of just *how* one rides a Monstrous Nightmare when it does its signature move. Honestly, I foresee more of what you described here ;) |