Poor Freed XD!

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I like the cheesy mess but the sex even was exaggerated

I LOVE Gratsu a lot, I have been reading Gratsu fanfict ever since I finished the series, and I have to say this one is may favorite I mean the only way I can tell that I liked it is if a blushed a lot like more pink then the color of Natsu's hair or if I started yelling, "Say yes Gray, make Natsu happy, SAY YES DAMMIT!" And I did both so this was a good and now one of my new favorite fanfict. Well then thanks for making my day. :)
Sayonara :)

omg awesome xD this was seriously hot and I think very much in character *** gosh i loved it xD

Dom/Natsu makes me a happy girl. lol
Good job

This isso cute 3
I love natray 3 and this story is so well done, and so cute, it melted my heart :D Iwould lvoe to read more natray, needs to be more if it in the world 3

I loved this!I love it when Natsu is top, cause he's a Dragon Slayer sometimes it's hard to picture him actually submitting to someone. I would have loved to see the other dragon slayer's reactions to him finding his mate...Also when does this take place? Because this would be cool if you turned it into a longer story. You know Natsu getting mad at Sabertooth for harming Gray, or during Tendro island, or other things. I loved it though, Can you make more where Natsu dominates other people too? Like Sting? If you do that,can Rogue and Gajeel be together? Loved it!

Man that was hot. Super hot.
And I would love to see another chp of this in which gray is dominant over natsu. :p
Never read a gratsu fanfic in which gray is dominant so please can you write one? Please please.

oh my Goood! been too long since the last rated story of natray! It's hard to find bottom gray... I wanna cry T.T thank you so much for writing this!

"Gray gave Natsu his favorite
smirk. The sexy little grin that he reserved just
for " Ok someone please draw me this sexy little grin. can't imagine it myself XD

bahahahahaha! that's what you get Freed! lololol literally loling right now!

Oh my god that was sooo good! And hot *-*
I really love this story! You're a good writer, I enjoyed reading every word :)
And the sexy time... holy damn I need a tissue. Now! Crap.
Thanks a lot for writing this!

Love,
AquaFeather

So hot XD
You can write another Natray story anytime you want ;)

Your story was so great, thank you ! Natray is so rare :(

OMG, I just love your Natray fanfictions, when I'm reading them I'm like ''Woooah *reading again*'' XD so.. Natray is my OTP and I was veeery happy when I saw your another fanfiction XD good luck in writing (*cough* Natray *cough*) fanfiction C: Love ya! u and sorry for bad english XD