I absolutely fell for it. This is awesome.

Genius!

I just spent the 2 last days reading your whole fic, that is to say I loved it a lot. That story was all touching and sadistic just like I like. You write very well too. I was hooked until the end and couldn't stop. I must admit the first chapter went a bit fast, I didn't understand all and how Axel and Roxas became so close in such a short time. But the rest flowed very well and so I went on. Some part were still obscure here and there (like the hospital part), but that may be my english that isn't good enough.

I really liked how you alternated the points of view of the characters though. It is a nice way to discover each of their personality and get attached to them. They were a bit too passive at some point I think. Like they lacked some originality, or some intensity... or more like they weren't defined enough. I did like Roxas' evolution in the end though. Seeing him screaming was pretty intense! To bad you never explained why :P

I didn't really paid attention to the songs-titles (I am not really a fan of Simple Plan or Maroon 5 xD), but I think I regret it a bit. When it read the chapter "Your Guardian Angel", I decided to listen to the song, since Axel was singing it. I listened to it a second time, reading in the meantime the lyrics in the fic and the story that went with it and that just fitted so perfectly and made the whole thing like a super dramatic movie, it was fantastic. I looped the song till the end of the chapter and must say I like it very much so thanks to you for introducing this song to me. That seriously might inspire me some fanart out of your story! Well, all this to say I might should have play the songs in background for each chapters.

Well, this is getting a bit long, ahah. All this to say, despite some little negative points here and there, I really really appreciated your fic. It was great and I sure wish you will write the sequel you told about (even more since you left it there in such a cliffhanger!)

Good luck with your next fics, it was a pleasure to read you :)

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