You really captured the complexity and depth of Danny. I love to gauge the nuances in Chris Messina's expressions. Totes amaze balls!

that was really good! i never would have thought it was your first fic!

Great fic, really well written.

Stop. How could you not finish?! Love Danny's pov

Omg that was amazing! Serious I am teary. That was brilliant!

Ooooh, such a tease! You must finish this you can't leave us hanging like that! This is great! Actually this is AMAZING, especially since this is your very first Dandy! : D

Wow. That was great. I'm so emotional now.

Oh god. Oh wow. This is amazing. Tears in my eyes! You captured all of the small snippets of their relationship progression so well. :)

This was so good! I like your character voices and the way you wrote Danny's progression of feelings as something he feels physically without really processing for a while. I can't believe it's your first fic. You should definitely keep writing!

Dang it I can see so many typos and mixed up tenses. Teach me to get in a rush for five. Hopefully it won't take anyone out of the story too much. Thanks for reading.