| Reviews for When I'm With You Pt 1: How To Fall In Love |
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Jesse chapter 12 . 8/9 Why did Oliver lie to felicity my olicity heart broke |
Jesse chapter 3 . 8/9 I cried when felicity was dreaming it was so sweet,points on that part it's my favorite. It's so cute and sad that felicity dreams about all the memories she had with Moria,Robert and Oliver is really sad. But the part she thinks of them as her family that is the saddest part in the hold thing. |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 15 . 10/18/2015 I think that this is one of the best stories, I have ever read. I can't wait to read the next part! |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 14 . 10/18/2015 Very good story! I think that you've done a FANTASTIC JOB writing this, |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 11 . 10/17/2015 This story is one of the best that I have read! |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 9 . 10/16/2015 Very good chapter, I love that you included Iris and Berry into the story. Keep up the good work! |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 6 . 10/16/2015 This chapter was SO GOOD! This story is adorable, I really like it! |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 2 . 10/15/2015 I loved the whole Frozen thing. And this chapter was awesome! |
twilightfan.garner99 chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 This story is different, but awesome! I can't wait to read more of it! |
shes-guilty-by-design chapter 15 . 3/22/2015 Finally got around to reading this! Olicity had so little time together as a couple and then their world came crashing down! I loved that everyone shipped Olicity and how their relationship progressed! Off to read the sequel! |
Graydon chapter 15 . 12/20/2014 Great ending (or is it really the beginning?) Looking forward to the next part. Only thing I ask is while I like the island, Slade and Shado, and look forward to the impact the "death" of Oliver will have on those he cares about. I have to ask you to please not take to long to make him the Arrow. I'd love it if you chose to use flashbacks like the show, but that's your decision. Either way I'm looking forward to the next part. Hope it arrives soon. |
Natalie Thropp chapter 9 . 12/17/2014 I loved seeing Barry and Iris in this chapter! I hope we'll get to see more of those two :) Nat |
supernena25 chapter 15 . 12/15/2014 Just for the record Felicity is gonna feel so guilty for getting Sara into that boat. They were all happy finally and this happened '( I assume the rest is or at least the island part happens identical to the show with just a bit of changes. More than anything I'm curious about Felicty and Thea and Laurel during the island time (also Tommy?). BTW I was wondering how Felicity was gonna get into the computer stuff so thanks for showing that. Felicity is gonna want to kill Malcolm herself after she finds out all of this is his fault. The downside is that Felicity has to wait a lot to see Sara alive again (and apologize although it's not her fault, would their friendship make Nyssa like the gang a bit more? XD) Great chapter love it although really sad ( |
ButterflyBlueEyes chapter 15 . 12/15/2014 Awwwwww it happened! I can't wait to see what will happen after he returns! Please don't show us what happened in the five years...I just want them to be reunited! |
Sunny2006 chapter 15 . 12/14/2014 Such an incredible story. Nicely done! Can't wait for the next part! |