Reviews for It's Not Okay |
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idono03 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 so good |
yoorim-ah chapter 1 . 3/10/2018 I’ve been having the Aomomo fever the whole week last week! Your fic made my day! Thanks! |
maojun chapter 1 . 10/24/2017 I know this is an old fiction but I just want to say that I love it |
withoutsmile chapter 1 . 10/14/2017 uwaah, this is good! hope you will write the other fic about them again thank youuu |
Petite Pirate chapter 1 . 7/3/2015 I really liked that story. Thank you for writing it, I'm really sad you don't have lots of comments. I mean that couple is SO OBVIOUS for Godness sake ! Your fanfiction showed me that you have exploited well this manga Universe, so I really want to congratulate you ! o/ Thank you ! Petite Pirate |
Tatsuhiko Hiroki chapter 1 . 4/19/2015 So freaking adorbssssss. So happy Dai-chan took the first step. Hehe |
crazyfan15 chapter 1 . 7/23/2014 Nice one. I really loved it! |
yuukiaoe chapter 1 . 5/13/2014 omfgggggg loveee it alot ! |
Kantarera chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Aomine Momoi Perfection! This is the best AoMomo story ever, I love it so much and I'm probably gonna read it again soon :) |
psychocchi chapter 1 . 3/22/2014 Aww I really liked this. I liked that you stayed in character and also the situation itself felt very realistic. Aomine and Momoi make such a good couple omg and i loved aaaaall the cute fluff Surpisingly I also rly liked Fumie, I'm usually not a huge fan of OCs but she was really cool, i would love to read more about her and maybe another member of the seirin basketball team hehe The only thing I've noticed is quiet a few grammar mistakes, nothing major but I suggest u get a beta reader for your next story :) |
aguma chapter 1 . 3/18/2014 Cute Story... loved it |
Nahi Shite chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 ¡Me encanta! ¡Finalmente un buen Aomine x Momoi! 3 Felicitaciones. |
evilselosa chapter 1 . 2/16/2014 Brilliant! I really love it! So sweet so funny. In character! |
Chun-Li chapter 1 . 2/14/2014 OH MY GOD! IT WAS SO AWWWWW! *_* They are so cute together! I L-L-L-L-L-L-L-L-LOVE IT! and then the ending : DOUBLE AWWWWWWWWWW! |
Melmel Phase chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Oh my frog finally. FUCKING FINALLY! Please excuse my language :3 But I've been looking for an AoMomo fic for MONTHS (since I watch KnB in the summer) and this is the only one but it's BEAUTIFUL. I was so angry at how many pictures I could find of them together but no fics that I was close to making my own. That whole "suddenly he was a man and she was a woman" was what I was going to base it on. It's like you took my dream and made it into a fic that I'm not going to stop reading until there's more and even then I'm going to read this. Like they're perfect together. Why don't fanfic authors see that?! I love you so much for this. Like you don't even know. You just made MY LIFE. But there were some mistakes. I would love to edit your work for you whenever you need it, just ask :D More like clean it up a bit. But it's perfect Like I'm dying. When I saw this I almost peed. Excuse how gross that is but I'm like an excited puppy right now. Also, Hyuga's little sister? Um yeah, LOVE her. Definitely can't wait for you to write her story. Very excited for that. Amazing work hun keep it up |