Can't wait for more!

Love this story! please tell me you didn't abandon it...

Devout, and dedicated characterisation. Quite lovely I must say. Brilliant work with Lottie, you turned her into something rather wonderful. Her soul is simply endearing. May she devour the apples of immortality, and rise to be one of the Gods.

...the words described in poetic trance at the bottom of every chapter. They are truly, and utterly beautiful. Indescribable.

Please tell me you are continuing this story. This is a really great well written story and it would be horrible if it was just left behind. However I don't want to be a bother so take all the time you need to create another wonderful chapter.

well done. I just enjoyed reading this fanfic. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter soon.

You HAVE to continue

Love this
Please don't stop writing

OMG you finally updated! How long has it been, darling? Anyways, welcome back! I'd love to see more of your story~ Lottie and Loki are so sweet!

I'm so glad you updated! Can't wait to read what comes next!

I missed this so much! Omigod...beautiful chapter. Just beautiful.

I love this story, I've always wanted to read one where someone loves loki in spite of all his darkness, and is willing to become just as dark (rather than trying to change him). Keep up the good work!

Are you going to change the plot of Avengers at all? It's always disappointing to read a fanfic where the plot is basically the same except for an original character thrown in. Maybe have Loki come much farther in taking over the world, at least completely control a few countries, like the US, starting with New York. Or have him win altogether and the avengers have work from scratch. We've already seen the movies and enjoyed than, now it's time for something new.

One thing is, in the beginning it seemed as though Loki really did care for Charlotte, taking care of her and supporting her. Now he seems to just be using/desiring her and she is nothing more than a woman in an abusive relationship. We need to see a more unselfish side of Loki for some depth of character. Yes, I know it's the "Avengers Loki", hard and cold, but like I said before we have already seen that. Make him more complex and change thing up.

"Then will you stand with me, and watch your world fall?" I literally have chills. This is beyond awesome.

Your talent is just...wow. You can really throw words together, I mean I write Loki stories too, but gee whilakers, I wish I could write like that! Love it!