Q.Q Tenmaaaaaaaaaaaaa... *hugs Tenma*
Tenma: ? Who are you?! *panicked*
Kariya: *laughs*
Kirino: *whacks him* How can you laugh after what happened to him?!
Q.Q SupposedlyNiceQueen-dono, please update soon...

It's not a mess! I'm glad you wrote more and I'm grateful! It is an amazing chapter and we got to learn a bit about Tenma's background which I was dying to know btw so thank you for taking the time to write more and sharing it with us readers! Good luck on the following chapters!

What's a mess? You need help? This is pretty interesting, but if it's the direction, I suggest writing the draft for the complete story while it's still early.

thank you for the update; I hope to read the next chapter soon

Great story, for something you haven't written in a over a year, this is still pretty good. Keep it coming.

Yes! Thank you for updating the story!
I was wanting to read the story for a long time.
I hope that you can update more often cause I really interested in the story, more than before.

...m.o.r.e!...i can wait anymore

This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon

I love it pls continue I really want to read the next chapter

Wishing you luck on your next chapters!

okay, what are the bad things happening to him?
Update!
This is really good!
No, It's awesome!
No, It's incredible!
Wait...
I'm speechless actually!
Update!

Hmm... Nice chapter, but could you write in more paragraphs? It'll make it easier on the eyes.

Ooh! Kirino and Kariya have joined! And I wonder what's Tenma's secret!

Good luck, anyways! Hope you do well!

I love it! Your writing is great! Also, is this based on Ayakashi Ghost Guild? If it is, cool! It's based on my favourite IPhone game!

Oh my gosh! Finally a quality fic! The writing style and grammar is impeccable!
Thank you for writing this, and I will be looking forward to your next update. Good luck!