This story is interesting.. to bad it's only a one-shot... haha wanted to see more interactions I mean I am a fan of A2718... may it be romance or family..

Brotherly concern is good.

Ahaha you could turn this into a series ya know? Even a drabble-ish one would be okay

This story is good.. I liked how you portay the characters here, but I'm really confused with the pairing problem.. You said it was Ala1827 and you also said it was HibarixAlaudexTsuna...
That's all... This is a good update btw.. :D

Love the story ! It was sweet and funny :) . Bye