Pretty damn good story. It's different and I love it. Please update soon.

Pleas update soon

please PLEASE update! I miss this story so much

16.
Chapter 15:Ashley's defection
then Ashley's scream was heard then Drained of as all remaining blood with his Drained then with b itten an d drained b est frien ds pregn an t were married the seer foun d them Ashley was dead without blood you b roke this rule this on e you die Felix rid of of her her highest pitching sc ream was heared Executed her of a Kitmuse with him with them then Murdered with both then it was too late the remain s of blood drained with both both the n it was too late Ripped the heads then the head was too late to save her the venom was dissolved b y her then Poppedfreely then it was too late m achin es failed then the Chan ge happen ed herself begun the truest tran sform ation in to something else the n Slienced with them b ring themfrom the bodies with the freaks then Extin ction of her then with them suddenly herself rebelled hated them Broken beyon d repair then n ulled then brought the bodies we foun d her is dead drain ed of blood with his are sickly paler who turn ed her unknowen b ut she is dangerous

Love it update soon she's like kira from teenwolf

Aro will not break these two up, Jacob will not go back to Nessie, and I can't believe Ashley is a shape shifter too that's awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad you're back. Happy writing :)!

Oh please update this story! It's so good. Happy writing :).

10.
Chapter 9: Ashley's BURNING!
it happened herself had Wild Crimson eyes was so Frightened after her truest Change at Fifteen years old was so terrified then a primal feral urge to Atack was a Hissing was so Angry a Roaring growl was so confused but fearful acted mostly Human the Newspapers reported a young rouge newborn Vampire bright But Shattering Crimson eyes suddenly was very Enraged but was too fast the Rumored Headline YOUNG VAMPIRE GONE WILD AND USES HER PSIONIC TRACKING POWERS FROM EARTH'S CLIMATE TO ATTACK BETTER WENT ROUGE! IS A SURVIVOR OF THE ARMY WENT CARNIVOROUS FROM KILLED VULCANS! It was Delivered to Italy with a Moving girl so young not yet older had a Bodysuit and wearing blood-splattered clothes no shoes wild but officially Crimson eyes that Caius lost his Temper summoned the guard this she is uncivilized but trained but highly Attacked two with as all of she is a Danger to us then suddenly herself was so steamed but was in a rage her mouth was so Venomous but baring her fangs by hissing like a Carnivorous was still attacking and went a CRUNCH! With them then the Volturi Senior guard Cullens that one over here that newborn must die with them! FELIX! Execute THEM FOR HOLDING THAT NEWBORN! That Ashley with each three races were Screaming with the three Races and all of the Sudden with the their own Allies suddenly were all of them with the Families al of them Killed but murdered with pets could not suddenly RIPPPP! then they took them away for testing then a Alien Radiance and much many more glorious light but broken free but the bodies as very as all of them but it was all over they were punished but detain in America forever but they all of them paid a price then it was as very as all of them each three race murder but it was a Completelt finished mission killed as all Supernatural races held each three but took away their lives but their souls as all reformed as people then all the sudden the very as all of as all tribazillions as all of them very much more many monstrous as very as all of them tribazillions All of them suddenly Erupted as all of his very tribazillions and mazillions as all of their Prizes who as very as all of them very as all of them very as all of them Exploded but completely shattering as Volturi members brainwashed to do their bidding Ashley she is healing differently it happened she regenerated from her healing trance Doctors yes then herself was paler sallow transparent oh ouch what happened the Volturi Senior Guard Were sent they killed her but with them as well we Broken the law but the Seeds of us them could survive oh my god we died but Murdered us them that's it this means WAR! For Survival Freedom Domimating this planet mates a Northwestern Vampire Wars will Fight for rights and our lives we will Battle ON! Then the Volturi heard this about themselves were unable to breed at all but were Furious so Enraged but it was a side Affect but lost their Half of their seeds but crashed then looked different by now but caused families to mourn their lost seeds forbid the as all of them to see friends as slaves to the each both controlled the world but the bodies as very as all of them vanished but crashed but much many more prizes as all of them very tribazillions as all of them his each both Shattered but Really Exploding but it went a hardest crunching crashing blasting light Ripped out the officially Volturi members as all of suddenly bound to Him with the rest with as all of them were his Finally but it happened each both with the friends with the turned was next then it came too late lost the members Irina Hulien Joham Maria Victoria and James and Laurent were as very as all of them were his Members who forbid the former friends added the former nomads as members with them as members officially they were cast out from here but it happened a secondary light but it was all over then lost their souls to her were his fully time but they were his Assassins were all of them gifted but highly cultured but talently specialized hunters then the Seer had a terrifying vision the Volturi they took away the bodies hired mutated Vampires as very as all of them they killed them oh no not them we added them after turning them to save them their lives the hybrids are teenagers we can't have kids they do eat sleep but hunt blood but Exploded as Kindred so us/them so after their deaths they were unable to have kids at all but it happened each both with their pets with child suddenly slipped away but in the morning they vanished they were Immortal but they were within the thing Shattering it all of them were as all of places causing bones a lot of bones crunched over but but new places but it happened With as very as all of their places but it went along lost the very as all of them suddenly they were showing a lot of powers then Ashley now control the climates very well intoned in a Voice so cold but harsh but bitter Fear us I' Ashley I am not human anymore I am a Succubui I eat your energy your life source bow to us we are your real masters and rulers and Commanders of the Vampire world you are our Servants and Slaves FOREVER! it's Working she has Golden eyes of us yes then it was no more of them but herself Was glowing with Bella with Reneesme acted like Vampire women the Volturi were furious Marcus was under her spell It really happened again lost the bodies were as all bones but as all broken free but it was no more humanity only Vampires.

Awww how dramatic! Live the update! Please keep it coming :)

REally loved it. Couldnt stop reading. Hope you update soon!

Nice! Update soon plz!

Very nice chapter! You'll have to update soon please because cliff hangers give me heart attacks & I don't have Jacob to come & save me (

plz plz plz update soon

Loved the update! & I love that it hurt Jacob that she slapped him! Can't wait to read more

Finally I can't wait for her and jake to began a relationship I never liked him ending up with Nessie hated that update soon