Okay, this was amazing! I loved this so much, and i would have reviewed every chapter but i was too caught up reading!

This story is sooo sweet! Once I started I couldn’t stop reading

I was actually really enjoying this story until chapter three. I mean, it's fanfic and you can do what you like but I'm kind of a big fitz-simmons fan. It's well written though so good job.

still hopefully for new chapter! you did a amazing job!

Oh my god my heart

Just finished your story and wanted to tell you that you did a pretty good job :)
I liked your storyline and I noticed that your writing skills have improved throughout the story

With Regards
FanGirl1300

Haha love Skye's response.

This is a fantastic story!

This story is amazing! Can't wait for more!

Love this story so much! The characterization of Phil was especially poignant and beautiful. Kudos on a wonderful little fic!

This story is amazing! Thank you for sharing your writing skills. Loved it

I've just finished chapter one and I couldn't help leaving a comment right now because I'm totally thrilled by how you portrait characters. What you did is absolutely fantastic, I mean, I just started reading AoS fanfics several days ago and most of the fics, to be honest, failed to capture personalities of everyone, especially Skye, admittedly a kid growing up in foster families is beyond our imagination, so Skye in some of the fics seems very off to me, either too rainbow-and-sunshine-y or acting weird in a not-Skye-like way. But your Skye, Jesus Christ, is perfect in every single way, she doesn't only match my imagination, but way exceed it, Skye the orphan, who's been struggling not to hope but hope is always burning in her chest, who the world failed and she decided to fail it back, who doesn't dare to trust and tried to actingr tough but the essential part of her is always kind and soft, there're so much layers of this character and you catch them smoothly and precisely, I want to applaud for the emotion and logic behind her action, everything makes so much sense, tbh I think even the original show couldn't make her this believable and real. Coulson, I see you captured his kind and calm and understanding feature, kernel of his characteristic; As for Ward's part, brilliant parallel story, he's a jerk but you'll feel sorry for him, exactly what the show makes me feel. And now I can't wait to observe the rest 3 chapters. love your writing.

Aww that turned out to be really cute. Perfect length too!

Aw, this was so sweet! I've never shipped Skye and Jemma, but in this fic, it works. Very well written, and very adorable. I loved how all the characters fit into the story.

i only got into agents of shield recently and this is actually the first fic i've read for the fandom. i loved it. so much. i never really thought of simmons/skye before but i'm getting super in to it now! :D