Thanks for writing

so beautiful

so i love your writing you shouldnt feel ashamed :

also omg the thought of a bloody toothiana scared me im going to bed now ok thanks

As soon as i read 'Bunny' in the same sentence as 'nipped', 'his', and 'throat', my initial was just "NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE ILL PASS NOPE" xD and i was just waving my hands infront of the screeen before sliding strait to the bottom... and i found even more strange stuff bellow. hahahhahahahaha... whyyyyyy... x'D

Ah mysteries and more! can't wait for the next update.

Sweet chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I am really enjoying your story.

Ooh I would totally read a sequel to this. Can't wait for the fluff or even a nice lemon. Mmm lemons. Nice cliffhanger on the chapter before.

Well done

I think the sequel is a good idea. Keep up the good work!

Oh good you aren't going to keep him dead. Than I might have to hunt you down. I mean I like angst as much as the next girl but you don't mess with my Jack. I can't wait for the next one and it was pretty awesome to see my name in the author's note. I try and review all the stories I read to give writers the enthusiasm to keep writing.

First, I'm glad to be acknowledge in this chapter, you don't know how it means to me. Oh and yeah, no problem, you're welcome. I sort of get it now. I'm glad that Bunny took him first... physically, it brings me so much relief!
Second... yes! The story still goes on! I thought I was going to wait like a week or so for the next chapter, but conveniently you updated this afternoon and I get to read it as soon as I got to bed. Thank you!
Third, dude, I don't know the other readers, but I would like the story to be long, especially in the chapters. So don't need to hold back! Leave details for the fluff and lovely lemons ;) I would be a very happy reader for this new pairing I suddenly got into... I think this morning or last night... so please, I would like it if you... would make ... the... chapters ... a bit longer? -/-
Lastly, I'm glad that you somehow coincidentally answered my prayers, but that means I'm gonna have to wait a bit longer. But There's a way to get Jack back! Yyyeeesss! Its not a tragic ending! Well... at least I hope there won't be any in the future chapters or in the process of Jack's ''resurrection'', that would be a bummer. I can't wait for him to get back and FrostBunny fluff and lemons to come. Oh and the whole Pitch problem to be resolved or idk something for him to just leave them, especially Jack, alone.
So does Jack have the black sand embedded inside of him? Can Pitch still hear a see through Jack's point of view? Is Pitch still back? Ahhh... I have so many questions!
Well update soon and please write more in your chapters! I would like to hear thoughts of the main pairing about each other, fluff and lemons! I'm just really out there when it comes to the pairings I'm into... plus, I really like the plot and the suspense.
DETAIL! LONGER CHAPTERS! FLUFF AND LEMONS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This isn't over right?!
Jack is still alive right? He's going to live right!?
And... you are going to give more details on their lemon moment, right, if this isn't over?
Wait. The flashback that Bunny had was before Jack was under Pitch's control. Recalling to the previous chapter or two, Pitch was explaining his thoughts about Jack and how much he wanted him. From there, I remember he said he could see and hear what Jack seeing through his point of view. Pitch then says that he hated how Bunny was with him and, at some point later, said that they didn't get around sex... so... here in Bunny's flashback... did they make love?
I'm a bit confused... if it was foreplay... cuz it didn't some like that to me...
Anyways... please, please please update soon! Or continue on with the story! You gotta!

Yes I do (hate you). Arg! You just can't do that to a person. Leave them on a huge cliff hanger and Jack being dead. Bunny needs his snowflake. So write like the wind.

;A;

OMG! You can get the heart racing. Love it.