This is really good! I haven't been able to encounter a really good Connorline fanfic for a while and I'm really liking this one! The way you portrait Connor and Aveline as years passed is well-thought out and super interesting to see them interacting more. I'm actually hooked on this! I really can't wait for more!

I know this'll probably never be updated (guessing by the date stamp) but its hella good! Great job

I really like this story; nice dialogue, nice setup, plot's solid so far. Even though I'm not a Connorline fan this is a good work of fiction. I was actually wondering; would it be okay with you if I used the drunken tangent in a fanfiction of my own. It was such a good idea I had to ask. What I did instead though was I gave it a little more dialogue and continued from there through Gerald, and I hope to turn it into a Gerald/Aveline story. Is this okay with you?

I really liked this story, even though I'm not much of a Connorline fan. The plot, the dialogue, the character portrayal, all of it was great. I'm actually writing my own fanfiction and I was wondering if I could base it off of this. Mine is more of a Gerald/Aveline fanfiction, and so far it does include the drunken fits part, but what I did was I added more to it, more dialogue, more of what specifically happened. Credit of course would go to you and if you don't approve I'd be more than glad to remove it and make any necessary changes. It's a little lovey-dovey so far, but it's my first fanfiction so bear with me.

This is beautiful and amazing and I don't know why I didn't read it sooner! Please update!

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

this is such a good story and cant wait till you make the next chapter

Aw yiss. All the ones I've found for these two have been romance focused. You have a plot, I could fall to my knees and weep, you have a PLOT.

This is some excellent work. I would love to see where you plan on steering this adventure and begin their romance.

nice job

you need to update this immediately! urgently! connor and aveline are so awesome together, and no matter wat theyre doing, its humorous and entertaining :) please update soon! plllleaaasssseeee

Dude, none of it are tedious nor fillers. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I really wonder what happened to the other assassins ! Great job ! Keep it up :)

I have no clue if I reviewed earlier or if im just being stupid (probabily the later) but I just wanted to say you have an excellent story here. Good dialogue and plot as well as decently portrayed characters (which I suck at doing) anywho just wanted to tell you good work and good luck with the story. Any more questions you want to ask PM me or email or whatever.

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Great story I like it. Very well written.