QUESTION? Will we ever see any of the other Kages ? Like Tsuchikage Onoki or Raikage Ay?

garra will kill him

i strongly hope he dosnt go sith

ola devo decir que me encanta tu historia no se que mas poner es la primera vez que hago esto a pesar que la e leido varias veses

Gaara/Noctos is a Pairing I can see happening in Future Chapters.

BRUH

Maybe you could have Shino and his cousin make a Lightsaber Resistant version of the Stave of Buzzing Bark for their Diehard queens

Just want to say that this is gold. I have the habit of reading the whole thing almost every time you update. I'm no stranger to The Old Republic mythos, and to say you have out did yourself is under selling it. Character development, scene description, pace of the story... I can go on and on. I am having a hard time believing there is only over athousand follows and favorites. Man this is good. Here's hoping the next 75 will be as captivating as the 1st.

When are you going to resume updating your other stories!?

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my god please update this marvelous piece of fiction please! i need more chapters quickly.

I just re-read the story. Love it. I always laugh hard and just plain enjoy this story.

As for Yoda's race.. well, I know theres nothing official but there was a fanfic where it was mentioned by a name that stuck with me. EroSlackerMicha's story Jedi Knight Naruto named the race as 'Trog', referenced twice in the first chapter during the first interactions with Yoda. Not an actual official name, but it stuck with me for some reason. Seems like a good a name as any.

Anyways, thanks for the update and I eagerly await to see what happens next!

If now I feel that hinata will die and that’s how he ends up with Sakura cause she will bring him back from the dark side. Which would be kind of cool

I was a little heated in my last comment. I don’t really want hinata to die. I’m just really annoyed how you wrote these last few chapters and the interactions between your characters.

Let’s start with the interaction between everyone and naruto. They are all leaving him the dark for no fucking reason. He is a grown ass man and the person they have trusted to lead them yet they are keeping something detrimental to the unity of the group from him. Example: there is this group of friends one set of friends are a couple and right now one of the couple is cheating on the other and everyone of the friends know but instead of telling the other one they just tell them that it’s something they don’t need to know about. Literally everyone is hiding something extremely important to his relationship from him and won’t tell him cause it will be detrimental to their perceived happiness. This is what this looks like to me!

No let’s get to Sakura. She has no choice in this. It’s like a god(cough author cough) decided she was gonna have a special bond with someone no matter what she did and she has no way to control it cause everyone who can teach her are not willing. She is getting shit on and her heart torn apart for shits and giggles. Example you have a best friend that likes you and even asks you out and always does things for you. You don’t quite have the same interest in them but you appreciate them and definitely like them a little. Well one day you have an accident and fall into a coma and in that coma you have this experience of a whole lifetime where you go and end up being with that guy and just having the most amazing live story and it is all you know. Now you suddenly wake from your coma and years have passed and the guy is standing over you like he does every morning in that dream where he leans down and kisses you. When you goes to lean down towards you you reach up like you normally do and just pull him into this kiss filled with all your tender emotions built over a life time of love and dedication. Suddenly he pushes you away and all you can feel is confusion and hurt. This man you love with everything looks at you in shock with a look in his eyes that don’t quite recognize. You now find out everything that is happening and that he is married to someone else. Your whole world colapses around you and all you can think about every time you see him is everyone moment from that dream. Every touch and kiss, every “I love you” said. Suddenly everyone is telling you to move on and even his wife which used to be a friend of yours is screaming hate in your face and telling you to stay away from the man that you have loved for so long. They are telling you to get therapy and to forget but how can you just forget the love you have for him. This is what I see. Instead of just having her fall in love with lee, you decided to make this convoluted love triangle that can’t happen. Instead of having them start off rocky and hinata and Sakura slowly work things out and compete with each other you instead have this mess.

Ok well I’m actually super disappointed with this whole situation. Like why even add the drama between Sakura, naruto, and hinata. It really doesn’t have any place in the story and just drives an unneeded wedge between all the characters. I mean I can understand this if you were trying to make a harem situation but if your not it’s completely pointless.

If anything at this point it seems like the force is pushing Sakura and naruto together and hinata might as well die for it to happen. I generally like hinata over sakura but in your story I’d rather have her not be here anymore because it’s just tedious right now and pointless.