I thought you got them right. Liked the interplay . Might be easier to get a dog, huh? Perhaps Kennex should ask to sleep at Dorian's, then they'd both have to put up with Rudy.
Or maybe not. Mum pretty sure one of them would take him out. :)

I'm definitely liking this one so far. Can't wait to read more. And you captured the characters perfectly!

Liked this.