Plz update soon I hate it when it takes 2 years to update a story

You should keep going! Has great potential!

OMg I love your version. its so similar but it feels like reading a different story. please write the next one!

Hey can you plz update soon ok and have a Naru and Sakura friendship form plz and over time Naru and Saskue but make it slow I hate it when it moves to fast ok plz and thank you!

Ouch... yeah, they just discarded their guarenteed ticket into genin-hood. Of course, they will pass eventually, but still. Anyways, I always thought the bell test (or the way that Kakashi did it) was stupid; these are GENIN. Set it up so they have to work together is fine, but for the "only two pass" deal, does he have any idea how few genin would see past him trying to pit them against one another? I think that part of the test is nothing but an excuse to fail genin teams.

Well there goes the first plan. I wonder what Naru os going to do? Anyways love the story so far! I hope you update soon!

Great chapter! Super well written:-)

I know you said you are not going to try to make her overpowered but some authors try so hard to do that there version of Naruto turns out to be the same weak, pathetic, and stupid one from canon.

Because in my opinion the progression of skill in canon was agonizingly slow that is unbelievable and the level of skill shown was terrible. For example look at Naruto they made him too stupid , naïve and over reliant on shadow clones, rasengan, and Kyuubi with crappy taijutsu and weapon skills. Its like Kakashi and Jiraiya didn't want him to get strong; I mean they both neglected to tell Naruto the secret behind the shadow clone jutsu. Kakashi and Jiraiya barely taught him anything. By time Naruto fought in the chunin exams he should've been able to beat all of the other competitors. He should have been an animal when he came back from his 2 in half training trip but from what I saw was that he got slightly better at dispelling genjutsu, taller, bigger rasengan, slight improvements in speed and strength, and slightly smarter. I was expecting him to be a ninjutsu powerhouse, taijutsu expert, extremely fast and strong ,talented in espionage, bigger grasp on toad techniques, hell of a lot smarter, mastered affinity and skilled in other affinity ,and more control of emotions and Kyuubi. All of that should have been possible considering who Jiraiya is and the fact Naruto has an extremely large supply of chakra at his disposal and inhuman healing ability from Kyuubi able to give him rock lee results in taijutsu department at the very least a couple months; coupled with the fact Naruto can use a large amount of shadow clones to get years worth of training in months. That's one of the main reasons why I despised Jiraiya and Kakashi.

Then the level of shinobi chunin and up should have all been significantly stronger. Then theirs famous shinobi being severely weaker than their supposed to be like Tsunade she would be even more deadlier with the use of ninjutsu which I do add that a requirement to be jounin requires the use of two elements thus her being a sanin then Hokage leads me to believe that she. Plus with her chakra control her genjutsu should be the stuff of nightmares. then you can get creative with her using poisons in battle, spitting acid(perk for being slug summoner) , carnivorous slugs, and many other acid based techniques. she also should have been faster, larger reserves, and a more fast precise devastating taijutsu style when not using super strength. She should no more than anyone to limit yourself as a ninja. Kakashi should've had two times as amount of chakra, more usage of genjutsu and ninjutsu arsenal. Mei Terumi was just a disappointment to watch. there's plenty of other characters that should've been more skill. Then its unbelievable that during the sand/sound invasion that many people where able to avoid detection and how can they not notice an entire convoy traveling in the Land of Fire. I think in reality they would've detected it a long time ago and prepared and take out low level shinobi discreetly

Will Kakashi and Jiraiya actually be competent teachers?

No, they shouldn't discard their original plan. It was good chapter

Nice update but 3 month wait is just too long... I was wondering if you abandon this story..

Super great start! I especially like how u didn't make her so clueless and dumb! I hope she knows that she can her the jutsu to get stronger faster!

omg love it

Love it!

Nice story, and I like the pairing you've chosen

Nice. Just hope for fast updates