I love it. I love it. I LOVE IT! I want to read the rest of it. Its spectacular!

Could you please update this story? It's really good! And I'll like to see where it goes!

I think the stranger they don't notice should be Stephen back for revenge.

I will die if you don't continue writing.

Could you update this story whenever you can? Or tomorrow?

this is a really good story! I like the relationship of will and elsa now it looks like there's a fire version of olaf now as for the mysterious figure at the end I'm thinking a villager that wants to capture will hope everything works out in the end please write more chapters as soon as you can.

are you not going back to this

I loved this chapter! This story is dealt brilliant so far. Can't wait for you to update. Please update soon but as soon as you can if that makes sense. :)

I now ship Ollie And Olaf hHa

Update!

Hm...the names Klaus and Stefan in one chapter...? Are you a Vampire Diaries fan or something? XD I'm joking. Great job!

Please, please, PLEASE update soon! I can't handle the suspense anymore! I'm literally checking everyday to see if an update was made! Arggghhhh! I hate cliffies!

This is awesome! Keep up the good work:) Please try to incorporate some description of Will's appearance in the next chapter. I'm dying to find out what he looks like:) Can't wait to read the next chapter:)

Stupid cliffie! I want to read more! I love this fic!

Great chapter! You left great suspense at the end!

Finally a love story for elsa to look forward to. Kind of excited for this.