Hey! I'm really hoping you finish this story because I'm freaking entranced! I love it! Keep writing!

Take your time with writing the next chapter. It's always better for a long wait and great chapter then a short one and a so-so chapter.
Hope you find out how you want to write this because the beginning is awesome! Good luck!

I read all five chapters in a matter of a couple hours. I am very impressed with your writing skill which I hard to find when it comes to Peter Pan fics. I really like both of your original characters. Robin and Rylie are both so similar yet so different. I love the banter they have with the boys and am adoring the idea of the two couples. I also like that the characters, especially Peter, aren't innocent little twelve year olds. As an adult I find that cursing and sexual innuendos bring realism to a story. No one speaks proper anymore, not even the twelve year olds.
Let me go onto say that I ship Asher and rylie so hard! It's going to be hard to see them stop fighting when they do get together. I also love Peter and Robin. I sense an awesome friendship brewing and then a passionate romance. I also feel like Peter still has feelings for Wendy and that will be a trying feat that the couple will have to get over.
Sorry for my long review I just like to be thorough. Great job!

lol

stfu that sneaky bastard! lol. not gonna lie sneaking in a kiss like that during a fight will catch a girl off guard everytime. I love this! you must keep going! I'm am official fan, you totally gots me for life lol!
updates! updates!

awwee

lol I love it, and for the record to all little lost boys.
one can be a lady and still have the vocabulary of a sailor. esp in Rylie's defense. I totally feel her pain.

omg omg omg!

Wonderful story. I love the characters and how it is more mature. I just love the whole thing. Please updat soon, I want to know what happens.

I fucking love this, update soon please.

I am literally so excited for th next chapter, I love this! Peter is so in character and th 2 protagonists are quite vulgar and different than the lost boys and peter :D this is so awesome I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!

THIS IS SO GREAT OMG

I'm so excited to read more this is so awesome OMG it's really cool and of course peters a cutie as always... Definitely following this is great :D

"Some" cursing, eh? Lol. This was really good! I might just have to keep tabs on it... :)