I know it's been awhile since this was last updated, and that life gets in the way, but it would be nice to see this continue. As much as I love the Astartes, I love seeing the clash of cultures between Mass Effect and Warhammer.
On a separate note, I think an opportunity was missed a few chapters ago: if the asari was confounded by a commissar's chainsword, what would she think of a titan sized one?

I love the story, don't ever stop, keep the chapter going.

Great story! :D

Any possibility that it will get updated again?

Love the fact that your going your own way with the characters for this story. Very enjoyable read.

please continue this! its an amazing story with so much potential

I hope this fic is not dead, it is good! I really like fics that focus on culture shock and the ramifications and such. Especially in crossovers.

I'd like to note that only a tiny handful of the Imperium's military actually does battle with anyone other than rebellious populations (not counting chaos-induced rebellions). Yet they still manage to kick everyone's asses. When the Tyrannids arrive, they'll probably get their heads out of their rears and authorize the Astartes to make as many members as they like and set up recruitment posts on every world.

Since they 'nids move so slowly between systems, this'll give them time to change who does what. Basically, the multiplied number of Astartes could handle rebellions (since everyone usually surrenders at the mere rumor of Astartes intervention) while the entirety of the guard (instead of just that handful) curbstomps everything else.

Look to the skies for your salvation.

Fuckin' A. Keep up the good work.

So if they are from Armageddon does that mean that Yarrick is here too? Anyways keep up the good work.

This is a great story. Two of my favorite fictional universes melded together, quite well I might add.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh do you think you might consider Ogryns? Their childlike stupidity could be hilarious when trying to interact with a more intelligent race like the Asari or Salarian.

Cool story! And you're doing a good job capturing the Imperial tech and lingo, so keep it up and update soon, please!

Wow this is really interesting! There is something I am confused about in chapter 4 you said that the imperial ground forces was the Armageddon Steel Legion not Cadians, however, in this chapter the Cadians are mentions to be in the battlefield rather than the Armageddon Steel Legion, can you explain that? Also in chapter 4 you messed up the spelling for the Armageddon Steel Legion you called them Steel Legion of Armageddon instead of Armageddon Steel Legion. Another thing is I was wondering why you chose the Crimson Fist?

Interesting approach to this sort of Crossover and I have to say that it works remarkable well. Smart idea to limit the WH40K to a single, small crusade. It should allow you to balance the two ideologies quite well.

I personally like the focus on Guard and Inquisition(at least some of the friendlier aspects of it) because in my opinion they are much more relate-able then say the Space Marines or Adeptus Mechanicus.

Do you plan to write the entire Thessa campaign or only show some parts of it (which would probably quicker and easier).

Good so far, though I was looking forward to seeing the reaction of the ME races towards the skull-shaped gas masks of the Steel Legion officers.