i shudder at how your grammar in this story was emphasize 'this story'

i feel liie this would be a fine mini harem for naruyo, ive only read lik rv fics, amd usually inner moka will like naruto while outer, tsukune. i like that

Hell to fuck yes reboot this shit

Boy if you don’t

I don't even care about bad grammar i just ughhh yelling all the time is such a turn off AHHHHHHHHH NAKAMA POWER AHHHHHH it's so ughhh calm and collected is way better

i'm okay with it, more good story the better

man i know that to keep the ideas and flow of writing you make some spelling mistakes, but plz go through the chapter once after writing

man you have some spelling mistakes, i don't criticize people for their grammar but please fix spelling mistakes

Interesting story so far but you really need to get a beta. Either that, or wait a few days after writing a chapter before coming back and proof reading it. This is basic English class stuff. Unless your using a translator it should not be this hard. Other than the grammar and writing mistakes I think this has potential.

Vampire Knight!? Count me out.

Don't know, I've never seen Vampire Knight.

Bashing of Halo check, Angel anime that is perverted check, Rasario Vampire check, and Naruto check.

From this chapter alone.

Here is some very helpful advice:

ONLY USE 2 ANIME OR AT THE VERY LEAST BE AN EXPERT IN MIXING WORLDS BECAUSE THIS MADE NO SENSE.

Thank you for reading this reply.

Okay after going back and skimming through the story looking for any parts I may have overlooked, I take back what I said about the nine tails healing thing. But, I stand by what I said about Tsukune not being a good fit for a Naruto x Rosario Vampire crossover and about reworking what you already have and not using vampire knight in the reboot. Aside from that great story and good luck in the future. :)

Okay I get what you're saying. But, I see a couple things wrong with this story and one with your potential reboot. First, Tsukune never should have been in this story, having two main stream protagonists like Tsukune and Naruto in a story like this just doesn't seem right choose one or the other but not both. Second, Naruto losing his memories doesn't fit either the reason being is that if this is a true Naruto fic and somewhat follows canon material than the nine tails would heal any injury that causes memory loss and could potentially break any seal that causes same. Lastly, if you are going to reboot stick to what you already have and just rework what you already have and what ever you do please do not replace Rosario Vampire with Vampire Knight that was by far the worst vampire anime/manga I have ever read/seen and you would be degrading an already great story by doing so. However, this is just my personal opinion and it is your story so ultimately the decision rests with you. Good luck! :)

I kinda missed the pairing with moka and her future son

So a reboot may sound nice