That was so amazing! I love it so much!

For a moment there I had to check if it didn't have Angst or Tragedy in genres because I really thought it will not work out. Also, the ending is super abrupt - injury caused amnesia doesn't really work like that to be cured by another injury... Also it kind of made me realise Haru might have some sort of mild version of Autism at least that's what his behaviour indicates in this story...

Oh my god there are tears everywhere I cant even. This is so amazing

Love this! :D

Its a beautiful story!

That was amazing! I only noticed a few mistakes, mainly 'it's' not having an apostrophe. But that's it. Gosh, everyone is so IC it HURTS!

This is absolutely beautiful. Amnesia is a bit cliche, but I can totally imagine this scenario working for them if Makoto ever did hit his head. And damn, the frying pan scene XDXDXD so funny!

Is Rin this likable in the later episodes of Free! ? Because in the episodes I was watching, he was a bit of a dick. If not, I will count this as OOC! XP

Where was I? Oh, yes, great story. I found it dramatic, charming, and funny all at the same time.
9/10. MAKOHARU 4EVA

it's...AMAZIIINNNGGGG! i'm going to share this with manga companies in japan .
you should go there and be a writer, if you're a writer now, so great!
one question, are you a college student? do you have time to write this much? how long does one story take for you? is it more than two or three days?
my gmail is:
please send me a message soon
thanks

Omg omg omg this was amazing ! I may sound like a wuss but I cryed

hi, I read the story
one question, are you female?
I think that you don't know how the characters are
Rin is kind to Haru and never tells him "you're a fucking mess", Rin never said FUCKING in the anime
in that part of your story, you could write, "Haru, you should tell him, you two were close, if he doesn't remember anything, would that be fine with you...?"
this story was nice though
please send me a message
thanks

*omg, that was actually kinda sad.i still loved it though. good job! sorry,i've got nothing else to say. anyway, 3 you and your story! oh, wait, one more thing. THE FEELS ARE REAL!

Omg it's so good. I love it

AMAZING! d(,)b

Okay. Well, damn. This was perfect :') good job. I really enjoyed reading this. Your style is awesome though :D

This story is so sad but heartwarming at the same time! QvQ
Super Great job in making this awesome story!
...Ahh, Da feels~~ ;v;

Wow, this was adorable, I loved it. The pacing was nice and the plot was well thought out. Great job! Best of luck to you!