This was the best ever!

Awesome! I can't wait to
Read the next one

Yes it is the right length.

Okay, so I understand that Sebastian's going through a lot right now, but he talked about Undertaker for TWO HOURS? What in the hell happened to Grell? I mean, if they're married then wouldn't Grell be taking this twice as hard? Like, did they just forget he existed?

Why is Ciel such a whiny little hoe, like Jesus are you fucking autistic or something

Love it

I really love this story and all the drama. It really made my day. Hope to see more stories!

Every little loose end managed to be tied up in this final chapter, this was an amazing story, I read the whole thing today! The only thing I really would have liked to know more about Claude and also what the rest of Sebastian's letter said to him 3

Wow, amazing story. Like absolutely great. The story line was so gripping I hardly stopped reading. Throughout the chapters there are quite a few spelling mistakes/typos but not bad enough that you can't make out what you're trying to get across. If you wanted I can go through and beta the chapters and help you with that but that's your choice :)

FINNY AND BARD! So cute, I was/am kinda hoping you would do a sister story to this fic about Finny and Bard. Especially after Finny got raped (was crying my eyes out at that part) and Bard was helping him and their escapades after considering Finnys first sex encounter was due to rape, how Bard must help his friend overcome this. You could really make a good fic out of that. (Also an encounter between Finny and Mey-Rin would be hilarious)

Sorry just threw that at you, feel free to just ignore everything I have just said haha.

Once again, amazing story. You did superb :)

P.s. If you did want me to beta (under no circumstances do you have to agree to this!) because Black Butler is set in England (where I'm from) I could help change the terms to what the English would say because you have a fair mix between American words and British e.g. US dollars (even though dollars are the currency for a few places I just associate it with America, please correct me if you didn't intend this) and UK university (I think the Americans call University college). Just a thought but no way do you have to agree to anything what I have said in this Review.

Hope you have a nice night

Loved it you made me cry laugh happy sad mad and crazy that's what it want out of a story to make me feel I hope you continue to write like this it was a great experience.

1) So instead of being by his dying husband's side, Grell was too busy feeling sorry for himself at Sebastian's?

2) Ciel saying that what had happened wasn't ALL his fault. None of it was his fault. It was all Alois. Saddens me that he still believes even a little bit of what he went through was his fault.

Thanks for the read. )

What does Grell mean a loveless marriage? Didn't Sebastian tell Ciel that Undertaker was in love with him for 6 years before Grell agreed to date him? And marrying out of pity? Is that why he married Undertaker? If so, I feel REALLY bad for the man. Dying of cancer & your husband doesn't even love you. Damn.

Sooooo Grell was married and he was kissing on Sebastian in the earlier Chapter?

Now that that stupidity is over and done with...sigh. Jeez.

Uhm...okay. What's his reasoning for breaking up with him? It makes no damn sense.